So... title explains it all.

I've noticed that some people who have read chapter 11 have been rather annoyed with the way Mockingbird was portrayed. And to tell the truth, I've come to the conclusion that those are some pretty accurate criticisms. In a scene where I was trying to go for tension, anger, and strong misunderstandings between two siblings, I instead delivered angst, whining, and melodramatic dialogue.

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