Part 1 is 5000 words.

Ok, I'm kinda getting sick of spinning my wheels on this chapter for so long, so here, I'm gonna release the doc for public comment. Anyone who wants to read, comment, and proof the draft, here it is...

Displaced into Nothing - Chapter 8: Desaturated
Edit: Done! Thanks for the help everypony! :3

Remember how I said that the end of Chapter 6 was the most violent part?

I was wrong. The end of Chapter 7 turned out to be the most violent part in the entire story. The good news is, there's nothing in the outline that could possibly justify that level of violence for the rest of the story, so if it bugs some of you readers, you're seeing the worst of it. (Like I said, this wasn't intended to be a violent story, it's just that sometimes violence ends up being semi-necessary to the plot)

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Hey y'all! I'm going to bed now, but tomorrow, I'm going to upload and publish the FINALLY COMPLETED 8th Chapter of Displaced into Nothing. This one is bucking WILD. (and honestly, a bit gorier than I'd predicted, but oh well)

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