Dragor —> Bad Dragon · 6:39pm Sep 13th, 2014
You’ve probably seen the ads for Bad Dragon.
Maybe you even clicked on one, and maybe purchased an awesome tentacle or a dragon tongue.
You’ve probably seen the ads for Bad Dragon.
Maybe you even clicked on one, and maybe purchased an awesome tentacle or a dragon tongue.
From this:
To this:
This thread made me do it:
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/211589/rate-my-avatar/thread/285444/is-my-avatar-bad
In the comment section,
1. please rate my old avatar from 0 to 100.
2. please rate my new avatar from 0 to 100.
I got a thread dedicated just to me.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/1565/christian-bronies/thread/307895/bad-dragon
How cool is that?
So I apparently wrote a bit when under the influence of my magical pain pills last night. Here's what I got out of it...
Sweetie Belle gains a soul —by Bad Dragon
CHAPTER 1:
The zebra stood up and widened her stance, yelling in the air. “The art of necromancy is all you taught, your vile instructions banishment on me had brought!”
Zombies!!
That’s right, Bad Dragon Clop Collaboration is still well alive and kicking. The latest chapter is from the talented author:
EclipseFairy
Since I know you just want to dive in and read this new contribution, I present to you:
I'm writing a new story based on an idea from Bad Dragon (Thank you, Bad Dragon). But before I get started, I need to know all of the problems with my writing from my previous stories and what I can do to avoid them if I want to be a better writer in the future.
You can either do a list or a series of paragraphs or just at least a few sentences if you want. Thank you and have a great day.
I present the final Reading Reaction to Sweetie Belle Gains a Soul and the ending of my first Reading Reaction.
Chapter 40: Plan set in motion
It had taken me several last pages to tear out all the letters that I needed. Nopony ever reads the author’s notes anyway, but Twilight wouldn’t know that those were the pages I had used.
I do feel like I’m one of those oddballs who actually does read the authors notes most of the time.
Sweetie Belle gains a soul —by Bad Dragon
CHAPTER 3:
The pain in my horn had really worried me since the fall. Fortunately, the hurt mostly subsided. I decided to listen to Apple Bloom’s suggestion and just give my fragile cone some time to heal.
Oh boy! I’ve never heard of a horn called a cone.
But it does seem like an accurate way to describe a unicorn horn.
Sweetie Belle gains a soul —by Bad Dragon
CHAPTER 9:
Four shackles reached out from the metallic circle and snapped at my hooves, replacing the magic bubbles. “Try not to move too much, hehe.”
Again the way she talks and acts sounds like a pedo.
“Psst!” Twilight pressed a hoof to my muzzle. “Who wants to get tested for mana potential?” Her head leaned close to mine, gracing me with a terrifying grin. “You do!” She bumped me on the snout.
I have to confess in my initial reactions I seem to have missed these chapters because they are marked as a separate story and I can be a blithering idiot so I present a brand new reaction that I’m sticking into the middle of my other parts of the reaction.
So without further ado:
Chapter 31: Expert on Love
The changeling’s body shook. He swallowed aloud. “Whaa… What kind of questions?”
Considering what these chapter are marked as…….
Chapter 22: Magic training
Boulders? Why are there boulders in front of Twilight’s castle?
Should we really be surprised by Twilight’s strange choice in this universe??
Sweetie Belle gains a soul —by Bad Dragon
CHAPTER 6:
I didn’t like being alone with Rarity in the bathroom. I preferred open spaces that would allow me to escape if I felt the need for it. Worst of all, she seemed to be getting ready for one of her tedious monologues.
Sister’s am I right? Can’t live with em? Can’t stuff em back in the old baby-maker?
Another day, another chapter published. There was actually a time when I thought about turning this short story into a novel.
Enjoy!
Chapter 16:
“It’s not a loss until you quit!” I exclaimed.
Victory or death! —Sweetie Belle probably
They shook their heads. It was obvious that I was losing them. Still, our goal was to gain our cutie marks, and we had to see the mission through together. I couldn’t let them abandon me in my time of need. I had to—make them stay in the water!
Why do they have to stay in the water?
*Suspicion intensifies*
Yet another story by the author you should know well: EclipseFairy.
Presenting:
Woodland Date
Chapter 19:
“Wow! The crack is totally gone now. To be honest, I was kind of worried about it. I even asked my brother if horns can heal if they break and he said nope. But never mind that! When did you find out that you can use magic again?”
*evil laughter intensifies*
Apple Bloom facehooved. “From our class!”
Be more specific Applebloom even I as a reader thought you meant the first ever
I've been on this site for a little less than 3 years now. Today I tried to remember all the groups I've made in this time, and I could only come up with 4 of them: