So the EQD rejection letter for KoA said the following:

"Right away, I'm seeing very unsteady perspective, repetitive word choice, unsubtle presentation of character emotion, obtrusive descriptions, lack of narration to set the scene during conversations at times, and repetitive sentence structure. The absolute rarity of paragraphs longer than two lines says you're probably not fleshing out the narration enough."

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This week or next week I plan to write at least one more chapter (or maybe more) of Kingdom of Avia. So if I haven't written the next chapter ("Journey North", it will be called) by next Friday, feel free to start nagging me to do it, provided you keep your comments civil.

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Like the title says, I submitted Kingdom of Avia to EQD. We'll see how this goes.

Notes from previous blog as well:

This week or next week I plan to write at least one more chapter (or maybe more) of Kingdom of Avia. So if I haven't written the next chapter ("Journey North", it will be called) by next Friday, feel free to start nagging me to do it, provided you keep your comments civil.

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There's a new chapter of Kingdom of Avia up! It's called "Journey North". I hope to get the next chapter, which will be called "Skaydi" up soon as well, but I have classes starting next week, so I don't know how long exactly it will be til it's up.

I just finished writing the newest chapter of Kingdom of Avia. It's rather violent. Feel free to read it!

Got a response on Kingdom of Avia from EQD- what am I supposed to do with this when they don't tell me the issues?

The email read:

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Came up with this idea when I was half-asleep last night:

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The other night, I got a really good idea for some scenes to add to my KoA fanfic, so I'm going to unpublish the chapters that I plan to work on, and will re-publish them when the edits are done. Currently I'm focusing on making my "Trouble's Waking" and "Bounty Hunter" chapters a bit more dramatic, as well as exploring some of Goldfeather's backstory in those chapters.

I'm not sure when these edits will be done since I'm in class year round, but I'll let you know when I finish them.

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After Change: Avia is done (which is coming pretty soon-ish), I was going to go straight into the final large-scale story of the Changeverse. That being Change: The new Kingdom, which would be of similar style and length to the first two stories. And dark, very dark.

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It's that time again, and the latest Change entry finally has a physical copy on the go. It's also the cheapest, seeing as it's the shortest of the bunch. A mere £2.71, and you can add to your Queen Book Bug collection!

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So I submitted Kingdom of Avia and later Bad Luck for a Bad Manager to EQD- got rejected, and they actually gave a legit reason this time! (Though I suspect they didn't read beyond the first chapter for both stories).

I'm probably going to submit all my currently-published stories as time goes on, and get rejected each time- I'm keeping score!

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I mentioned in a previous post that I wanted to ask Dr. Wolf if I could use his OC in Dr. Bobtail. Well, I did, but due to a line by Skaydi that I don't want to change (it showcases an important part of her personality), the story is PG-13, so I can't use his OC.

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With the way Kingdom of Avia is going, I might write some actual novels with characters whose personalities are based on the AviaVerse characters in all the Avia stories (so I'd also write a novel based on Eighth Sea, as well as the as-yet-unpublished story Kingdoms of Freedom. The novel would have NOTHING to do with MLP (Don't sue me

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