I need some help with a story · 2:44am Aug 31st, 2016
As the title says I need some help with a story I want to write. The story is about Spike becoming the hulk, I actually also have several other stories that will be set in their universe planned out as well. I have most of the story planned out but the problem is when I try to write it down as a story is seems to rigid it feels like I'm just writing so and so did this and so and so did that and it doesn't flow like a good story should. So I'm looking for someone who is interested in helping