Honestly, there wasn't a whole lot wrong with this chapter. Mostly some bland descriptions and not setting the mood properly.
Okay this time I admit I abused the "I did this..." rule a tone. There were other random sections where I knew I had a purpose for them at the time, but after rereading it, I had no idea what they were reffering to. I spruced up some of the descriptions, as a lot of it felt kind of...basic. I added in more emotion and tried to really drive home hoe the current predicament was psychologically messing with the Taraskans.
Hope you all enjoy and as always, thanks for being a fan! 
Aaaaand there we go! This chapter was a little more tricky. I had some confusing numbers in the squads and made some writing errors. Also there was some context confusion about who was doing what. not sure if anyone noticed or cared, but I did. Tried to make it a lot more gut-wrenching and heart-breaking.
SPOILERS if you haven't read past this chapter.
Okay so my ending plot points are just...super messed up and I have to fix them. There's a lot of " Situation A needs to happen so person B can save person A, but person B can't get there until situation B and AAAAAAAHHHHH!
I thought I had resolved this, but when I started writing the chapter, I realized there's a few vital details I missed and changing ONE changes like three others so I'm taking time to figure it out.
Okay...it's almost here. I'm not gonna give numbers, but I'm so close to marking KOTD book 1 as completed. Like I'm on the home stretch where a lot of chapters are prewritten scenes from back when I first started writing KOTD. This point until the end is planned out storywise, with plenty of room for me to add new stuff. I'm so excited but a tad sad to see book 1 be done and over with. With the next chapter, I'm gonna crack down and edit a few more chapters.
Hey All,
The interview season has been real rough so far, and as such I don't really have the time or the motivation to work on the big projects I have planned, which includes the third and final part of the General Spike Trilogy, as well as a re-released re-edited version of all three stories together, and a choose-your-own-adventure romance with Twilight Sparkle.
Season Seven will likely be remembered for its finale, and how it tied together storylines spanning many seasons, (not to mention its tie-in to the comic books). It also had some pretty phenomenal landmark episodes like A Perfect Pear, and Royal Problems - beautiful stories that tackled subjects we have all been waiting to see explored for a very, very long time.
For those of you outside the UK, you may not have heard that Secretary of State for Health and Social Care Jeremy Cunt Hunt is in the news for 'forgetting' about declaring seven luxury flats he owns. Here's a link to an article on the BBC News website. http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-politics-43748513
You can check it out here
I know its been 3-4 months since I managed to really get anything out and I'm sorry. chapter 6 of my Fallout Equestria book is actually done, we're still editing it. My editor took some time away due to his military priorities and after that has had a string of difficulties irl that I won't discuss. Suffice to say, I didn't want to pile edits on him while he was dealing with things of that nature, so I've been very lenient. Since then I've been working on chapter 7, that is already will over 25
My first story has passed moderation and been up for a day now. 
Awesome, right?
I know I was gonna put out a story in December, but then I decided that before the main story went up, I should give some background info. And Celestia's Students was born!
It's the first story in the SpoJuverse and will hopefully be finished by November in time for the first chapter for my other story.
Okay so I found like...two errors in this one. There wasn't anything wrong with it, and it's been that way for the last two chapters, so I think the worst is over. My main focus though, was to lengthen the chapter. It was sitting at a cringy 1600 words give or take. So I added about another 600. There's more plotting and predicting, as well as our heroes learning more about the world they're in. I think it looks a lot better, and I'm rather happy I decided to edit it tonight. My work keyboard
Even though I'm unsure when ch will start being released again due to the lack of a working computer for my friend who's editing, I'm still making progress on this thing. I now have ch3-6 of the second Act drafted and am starting ch 7 tonight. Well, Happy Tuesday!
The latest chapter of Equestria Mares: Princess Celestia's Secret Apprentice is up.
Volume 1 of Detective Pony Comics Present is complete. More will be forthcoming.
A science-fiction story about Twilight, set in the far-flung future, is nearing completion.
Other stories are nagging me to write them, and I shall in no particular order.
Life is good. 
Raziel is now finally going to start telling his story to Twilight and her friends, come here and see how Raziel's story began as well as how will the ponies react to it. Please tell me your opinion of it, as well as what errors you find so I can fix them later.
So, if anyone actively reads my stories, they might have noticed something new. In the author's notes of forty of my stories, I've added something: the date that they were revised for print. Minus a few very recent stories, there is a huge bump in quality from the previous editions. Most of my stories that will be ready for the first book I have I have in mind are from 2017. That's a huge leap in what I can do as a writer, and most of the stories got far more than a deep scrub of their quality;
Have I been working on King of the Dead? Yes. Has it all been on the next chapter? No. The next chapter is like 90% of the way finished, but I keep getting these huge urges to work on some of the final chapters, which in my opinion, are going to be super badass. Thank you for being patient!
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