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Oct
18th
2015

Dialogue & Story Detail Improvements · 9:02pm Oct 18th, 2015

Since the recent years of becoming a storyteller both in FimFiction and real-life, I've improved the point of view and direction of my stories at the best I can, to show a more detailed story than the ones I have now, so you'll see a lot of changes to the upcoming stories and chapters to come.

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Jul
19th
2019

Open Critique/Request: What Are the Biggest Strengths and Weaknesses in cleverpun's Writing? · 9:00am Jul 19th, 2019

I often make references to the idea that writing is a constant quest for self-improvement. It requires self-reflection and self-critique. But there is a limit to this. After a certain point, self-reflection and self-critique always suffer from a lack of perspective. There's a reason you get reviewed annually at most jobs.

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Jan
8th
2018

Chapter 1 rewritten · 3:23pm Jan 8th, 2018

For all who have read the chapter, both those who continued after and those who may not have , Chapter 1 has now been rewritten. Its not essential to read it again, you wont really miss anything if you dont read it but I think its quality has been improved, information is far clearer, and tone more appropriate for the story should hopefully be established.

Various foreshadowing and connections have been written in and now no longer a wall of text exists so...yay?

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Aug
2nd
2020

Writing 101: Jealousy · 12:54am Aug 2nd, 2020

Before we get into today’s blog topic, I just want to quickly revisit some of the political stuff from my second-to-last blog post.

Bad news: there’s still feds running around kidnapping people. They've retreated from Portland, but are explicitly being sent to other cities.

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Aug
26th
2023

Doubt is a bitch, but so am I! 👿 · 7:27pm Aug 26th, 2023

I was talking about FoE with a friend of mine, and it made me emotional, cause Fallout Equestria always makes me emotional, so now I'm like "AAAaaaaaaa I wanna cry but on the good way!"

But then I thought... What if my own writing never is good enough to make people cry, but in the good way? And now I also wanna cry in the bad way XD

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Jan
17th
2023

Reworking Dr. Faunas Clinic · 9:00pm Jan 17th, 2023

I'm finally figuring out how to make these chapters more readable and easy to understand.

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Aug
24th
2015

Rocky Romance Sequel Released and Subsequently Revoked · 7:43am Aug 24th, 2015

Recently I posted an awful sequel to an already awful story. Having decided to take the same route as the last and wing it, it was horrible. This time though, it wasn't just horrible; it was painful to read. The jokes were beyond disturbing -even by the standards of the first-, there were way too many typos, it was sloppy, and overall I wasn't very proud of it.

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Feb
14th
2018

Canceled my story · 10:35am Feb 14th, 2018

I am sorry guys, I got bored and ran out of idea... and due to no one wanted to edit the story I will look for another easier fiction that may easy my time.

That is all.

Jun
23rd
2015

Improved "Cultures" chapter. · 8:59pm Jun 23rd, 2015

After learning of the great support some of my readers gave this story, I felt obligated to improve the story a bit.

I fixed some errors, rearranged some sentences, and changed the ending a bit.

If you have some time and would like to have a quick laugh at this new development, feel free to read the story again, the changes though aren't that huge, just minor details.

For every new reader, enjoy the story with some humor.

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Nov
21st
2016

Bruh.... · 1:40am Nov 21st, 2016

So I have been re reading 'Stuck' lately and, let me just say... bruh. It is SO bad! Seriously, how does this thing have 99 up votes again? The plot is fine, but the execution is just so god damn awful. The dialogue is very messy, the show and not tell aspect isn't super prominent, I'm using parenthesis too often, character interactions are not well executed, I am disappointed in my 17-18 year old self. A 17-18 year old who took HONNORS english his junior year. I thought I was writing a good

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May
30th
2017

Let me fertilize the flowerbed of prose and fantasy with the manure of insults and disapproval · 12:47pm May 30th, 2017

Okay, so I spent an hour or two idly perusing this here site a while ago. Mostly reading comments and threads. Now, I’m the type of person who’s drawn to extreme qualities, both good things and bad things. Most people are like that, I think. They’d say that there’s nothing more boring than mediocrity. At least I say that. The original Star Wars movies are a great watch. The prequel-trilogy is also a great watch. They’re not ‘great’, they’re a ‘great watch’, I actually appreciate them. So many

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Sep
24th
2021

I Think I'm Getting Better At This · 2:18am Sep 24th, 2021

(I may have "stolen" CitreneSky's concept ideas for these guys, I'm sorry! I did change them a bit...anyway, here they are!)

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Dec
20th
2022

Cut Content Blues · 9:34am Dec 20th, 2022

Dammit... This is my third time deciding if I should cut a particular scene. Which undoubtedly means I should cut the scene. I've never considered cutting a scene that I wanted to leave in. It's just such a pain. I put a lot of work into it, but it doesn't fit with the chapter's theme. It's fun, but the chapter works just as well if not better without it. Sooo into my folder of cut scenes, it goes XD

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Oct
21st
2018

Random Ramblings CCCXXVIII · 4:14am Oct 21st, 2018

IN WHICH LOUD NOISES
Yesterday was a bittersweet day. First the sweet: Babymetal's newest music video.

Immediately after came the news that Yui Mizuno, who had been ill for a year, was leaving. More past the jump.

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Jun
2nd
2016

Openings in stories. · 10:06pm Jun 2nd, 2016

So... Something I really, really hate is trying to open a story.

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Mar
6th
2021

Reason Number 1 · 2:11am Mar 6th, 2021

Hello, everyone! It's CPR Sophia! Starting from today, I will post blogs about the reasons why MLP Gen 4 should continue one by one. You know, I am a very strong supporter of saving MLP Gen 4. However, nothing comes without any efforts. In 'Save MLP Gen 4 Project', I talked about the efforts that I made to save MLP Gen 4. Now, I will talk about the very first reason why MLP Gen 4 should continue.

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Jan
23rd
2023

I Finally Have a New Writing Style! · 4:30am Jan 23rd, 2023

Hey, guys! I'm writing a whole new story with a whole new style. Though I need some opinion on it and how it's written so far in terms of style and prose. It's very unfinished, but I could still use some help on what to improve on with the new style before continuing. I need an outlet for my creativity as I've been told. Maybe I can PM you what it is if you want.

Sep
4th
2018

ART DUMP! · 1:17pm Sep 4th, 2018

Time for an art dump! Now you can see what I've been up to for the last year. I'm truely proud of what I've been doing with my art, even if it doesn't feel like it (to me) at times. I wish I could devote more of my time to art and making my own content, but hopefully, on day in the near future, that will be a possibility.

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Aug
15th
2017

New Flashfic: Twilight Sparkle Falls in Love with Moondancer · 11:02pm Aug 15th, 2017

At BronyCon 2017, ROB brought a bunch of typewriters to Quills and Sofas. I cosplayed as Moondancer on Saturday, and was inspired to write a Moondancer flashfic as Moondancer.


Yes, her horn has a working fidget spinner on it.

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Oct
28th
2023

Chapter 18 is... still a work in progress. · 3:42pm Oct 28th, 2023

I've been working on this chapter for longer then I think anyone will expect. There was a time during this project where I had more then the next five chapters written, waiting to be edited and released, but I've since caught up. I've rewritten this chapter a few times without being happy, though I'm finally taking it in a direction that I can be happy with!

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