Is this a good pose? · 5:48am Jul 22nd, 2021
Or does it look less natural and more like her head has been twisted 180 degrees?
Or does it look less natural and more like her head has been twisted 180 degrees?
The Whole of Shaping Shadow Series, Book 1, Book 2, and The Anthology is getting a big edit! You may notice whole chapters will be published and the old taken down. While I have confidence in my self edit skills*, I know I missed minor things, and I may reshape some sections, while not making any changes to the story itself. I am doing all I can, to give you the best read possible!
...Is being delayed, at some point of the chapter it required I go and reread the entire story as I missed some details relating to characters... but while I relook through hours worth of reading material, I'm going to re-edit stories I edited already and stories I haven't yet. I already re-edited chapters one to three (haven't changed it with the new edits yet, might after this blog) and to those that read the pre-quel story to IANG, you may notice all the chapters have been edited as I took
I had alot of free time on my hands so I edited my OC, FlameStar. The outlines on his mane aren't use solid gray anymore. They've been color coded like Rainbow Dash's outlines in the Movie. He also have a small tuft on the front and more in the back.
Back in 2014, I posted a flash-fiction about Luna called "The Quiet One". Yamgoth wrote in the comments of Luna's "cold, silent fury", which wasn't what I'd wanted to focus on.
Read the new version first (it's under 700 words; link may change so go back to the story TOC if it's wrong), then read the spoilered text below to see how I fixed it. Then, if you would, tell me which version you like better.
Okay look, I'm gonna be frank, I've been trying to edit professionally for a bit and have managed to get a few clients who have been relatively satisfied with my editing skill.
Here's a few of them:
ppg1998
Xenopony
Arkolo
mr_minati
NOTICE ME: I only check FimFiction currently about 3 times a day. 1 when I wake up, 1 when I eat lunch, and 1 at night. If you message me, be patient, I WILL see it.
hey everypony I have just finished looking over all the chapters and am beginning to work on the new chapter!
Kinda think pink looks better on her than purple
(This is my first attempt at uploading a photo so I had to put it as an unpublished story’s cover then copy and paste)
Hello everyone.
I'm currently in the process of getting a new PC, due to the fact that my current one crashes almost daily now. In the meantime, for the next two weeks, story updates may slow down a bit, editing stories will definitely slow down due to the fact that I'm back to my old laptop, and commissions, just like other stories, will see slower updates.
As you know i got this story in my possession, there are some parts that need some rethinking, such as the part where hes going to war for example. just to say. I'm going to do my best to get this story in order. So what I'm saying is that some of the chapters are going to change. also, leave some suggestions in the comments to help me better the story.
Thank you, that is all
Dash, Out.
What is best:
Finish something, even if I must slice and cut things to make it work properly, and see it done, for good or bad?
Fix something, even at the cost of large swaths of story lost, and progress setback by some ways?
If you've read Chapter six, you may have seen that it was of inferior quality. I've reread the chapter and have decided that it does not meet my standards. I've taken it down so that it does not give my readers a poor experience, and I will not work on the next chapter until I am satisfied with the quality of the current one.
My problems with chapter six:
1. Due to the size of the chapter, Grammarly was not as thorough in its checking.
I have a 2300 word story for a writing competition that i just finished. Need someone to look over it real fast so that I can get it on fimifc and send it to the people by tomorrow. I'll be sure to credit you in the description.
Vren55: Yo, Georg. In your experience, did you need a big referral from a big author to get a lot of readers on this site? Doing some semi serious research for my next blog post in response to some comments I got.
The answer is too long for just an email. It starts with: Yes. No. It depends.