Proofreading for Volume 2 is nearly complete. However, I recall shortly after making Volume 1 available in printed form that some readers had difficulty discerning where chapters ended and the next began despite the titles of each chapter being front and center at the top of the page.
What can I do to fix this problem? Increase the size of the title text? Bolden the text? Underline it?
IN WHICH I PONDER LIFE
While I'm doing that, enjoy this live performance by Ladybaby. It's… a bit raw.
Anyway, I want to talk about fictional relationships and food past the jump. Shall we?
Hey guys!
Just wanted to let you all know there has been a problem with the new chapter. I lost the entire thing, so I'm rewriting it from scratch. So sorry for the delay! I'm working on it, and the next chapter will come out this week. Tomorrow I have to work late, and Friday I will be visiting my old man.
So sorry for the delay! Here is something adorable to cheer you up!
tl;dr: Ever notice how Spike is summarily dismissed or removed from fanfiction for plot purposes? “I left him at Rarity’s.” “He’s on a Dragon vision quest.” “Sorry, Spike. Maybe when you’re about a hundred years older.” Like he’s some sort of plot parasite. Lazy authors, the lot of ‘em.
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Hi!
So, much as I am sympathetic to the plight of the trans fans who weren't, shall we say, keen on Brotherhooves Social, I really can't help liking the episode. Big Mac is just so into being Orchard Blossom. (I'm surprised more people haven't gotten hung up on the anti-stallion sentiment suffusing the episode. Finally, confirmation of headcanon!) Also, that song totally reminds me of the one MandoPony did for the original
It's been almost a year that this comic has been sitting incomplete in one of my sketchbooks. I finally got around to finishing it.
Hidden behind page break because of sexual content.
tl;dr: Next time you decide to plant your bare ass on a priceless, one-of-a-kind treasure map, just make sure you’re not sitting on the X that marks the spot. Sends the wrong message.
Their reveal was much better than mine.
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Season 7 has now begun. The most remarkable thing about the opening was how underwhelming it was. Nothing actually bad about it, but we are accustomed to the opening episodes involving epic battles between ponykind and the forces of evil, in which a thousand-year old monster, or something, emerges to threaten the fate of Equestria or the Crystal Empire, and Twilight Sparkle and friends get together to blast it with rainbows and lasers.
tl;dr: There’s a reason there’s only one apple farm in all of Ponyville, and it ain’t because they’re lacking in space or demand.
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Whoo boy, this chapter. Ok. So, way back in the day it wasn’t the Tome that took over, but a super evil other villain you’ve already met if you’ve seen any of the show itself. My reviewer pointed out that it was a fucking stupid idea (my words; he was much more diplomatic about it) and I tore it out. It’s still in the deleted scenes I have in my workspace.
tl;dr: Don’t buck apple trees if you’re tired. You’re liable to pull something.
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What would it be like to not cast a shadow? Hold your hand up over your face to block the sun. Can you still see the light source? If so, how do you see through your hand? If not, how is the skin immediately around your eyes illuminated? I mean, magic, sure. But how?
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I've mentioned this a few times in the comments, but I'm a huge fan of this web-series called...
Well, Lost In Adaptation.
It's made by a dude that calls himself The Dom, and is about the differences between the original book and the movie adaptation/s.
Really high production standards, easy to understand with great plot synopses, and quite often hilarious.
Like my new temporary avatar? :V I'm really not into Halloween, but after seeing the newest Horse Wife, I just had to.
And corrupted the file I was working on. More than six hours of work lost. I don't have to start completely from scratch with cutting everything out, but I have to completely remake the entire scene so I can work with it.
Excuse me while I flip out over there for the next few minutes.
tl;dr: The color of a Unicorn’s magic is as unique as one of our finger prints. To see a room colored just so would be reassuring to a Unicorn in trouble.
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The Friendship Express: sometimes I forget just how young the target age is for this show.
tl;dr: When you take your quests from the Notices and Affairs Board at the local adventurer’s tavern, you’re bound to run into other adventurers. Keep to protocol and yield the right-of-way, and everyone will have a good time.
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You're still following along? That's awesome! Did you guess this chapter’s title? As we go the titles are going to get more and more meaningful, providing hints to what’s going to happen next.
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tl;dr: All any of us want is to be loved, to be cared for, and to be seen as a total badass.
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How did you guys like the shorter chapter? I would've folded it in with one of the chapters on either end but it just quite fit. Plus, it's been awhile since Twilight has had the spotlight. How about shorter Author's Notes? Not that anyone reads these, of course. I could probably spoil the whole ending and no one would notice. MAYBE I ALREADY HAVE.
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tl;dr:
"Ah kept it safe, just for you, silly filly."
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Happy Thanksgiving!
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This is one of my favorite chapters. Daring Do and the Lost Tome of Shadows is starting to encompass all the qualities I love about a good adventure story, and then some: danger, excitement, drama, and magic.
Also butt jokes. Goddamn I love butt jokes.
tl;dr: Look, I like have ponies bash their heads into things, alright? It’s a thing for me. It’s gonna keep happening. Just . . . just deal with it.
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Many thanks for reading Chapter 2 of Daring Do and the Lost Tome of Shadows. If you're enjoying it, why not hit that thumbs-up button and leave a comment? In case you couldn't tell, us writers are basically addicts that need the approval from others.
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