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Oct
11th
2018

Chapter 2 and 3 fixed! · 1:41am Oct 11th, 2018

Hey everybody.
I suppose this is aimed towards anyone who not only see's this, but also hasnt really gotten around to reading past the first intro chapters.
Chapter 2 and 3 have been cleaned up a little. Not a full rewrite, but hopefully enough to make for an actual readable experience lol.

Just in case any of you were interested :)

Apr
1st
2021

“Behind Him” Chapter 5 almost complete! · 5:16pm Apr 1st, 2021

Chapter 5 of “Behind Him” is very close to completion, I’m mostly just debating over whether to delete a certain scene, change it, or keep it. I also have a bit of editing to do, but that shouldn’t take long at all. My goal is to get this chapter out by tomorrow.

Jun
23rd
2015

Improved "Cultures" chapter. · 8:59pm Jun 23rd, 2015

After learning of the great support some of my readers gave this story, I felt obligated to improve the story a bit.

I fixed some errors, rearranged some sentences, and changed the ending a bit.

If you have some time and would like to have a quick laugh at this new development, feel free to read the story again, the changes though aren't that huge, just minor details.

For every new reader, enjoy the story with some humor.

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Jul
19th
2015

A request to look over a minor rewrite for the last chapter of : Dear Diary: Sunset Shimmer's Best Friend. · 1:20pm Jul 19th, 2015

Off an on I've been improving Dear Diary: Sunset Shimmer's Best Friend for the purposes of getting it on EQD. It's close and I need to submit it to the pre-reader HOPEFULLY 1 last time. Everything else is good but I had to make some changes to the last chapter. Mostly minor edits but I also neede to play up Sunset's reactions in the 3rd person section and add something more memorable and impactful for the

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Nov
21st
2016

Bruh.... · 1:40am Nov 21st, 2016

So I have been re reading 'Stuck' lately and, let me just say... bruh. It is SO bad! Seriously, how does this thing have 99 up votes again? The plot is fine, but the execution is just so god damn awful. The dialogue is very messy, the show and not tell aspect isn't super prominent, I'm using parenthesis too often, character interactions are not well executed, I am disappointed in my 17-18 year old self. A 17-18 year old who took HONNORS english his junior year. I thought I was writing a good

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Nov
28th
2016

Karen Joy Fowler reviews "The Magician and the Detective" · 3:17am Nov 28th, 2016

Back in, gee, November 2014, you won me a review from Karen Joy Fowler by giving over $1000 to help fund Clarion, the famous science fiction & fantasy writers' workshop I went to back when I was your age still older than you, which I keep encouraging you to apply to and none of you ever apply to.

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Jan
8th
2017

On Readings and Editing · 11:18pm Jan 8th, 2017

There are a couple things I wind up responding to in PMs fairly often, so I figured I’d put both of them here in a blog post and just make it a featured post on my user page.

On Readings and Spinoffs
So you liked one of my stories, and want permission to do a reading of it on Youtube, or do a spinoff/sequel of your own.

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Oct
23rd
2016

Concerning Editing, Cover Art, and Story Commissions · 7:14am Oct 23rd, 2016

This is something that's been bothering me for awhile and I need to get it off my chest.

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Jul
13th
2016

Edited a Story with Bendy · 8:39pm Jul 13th, 2016

HOLD HER GENTLY

I had loads of fun editing this story with Bendy! Also, it inspired this meme I just made. I can't get enough of it! "Quiet horsey noises" :rainbowlaugh: :derpytongue2: :trollestia:

Aug
6th
2017

"Batmare Begins" Story Update - Next Chapter Up In A Week · 1:58pm Aug 6th, 2017

Jan
18th
2018

Shadow Tease · 1:47am Jan 18th, 2018

Looks like something’s coming, folks …

That’s right. It’s almost time! Alpha readers! You know who you are. And what this means.

Are. You. Ready!?

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Jul
23rd
2018

3rd Edition Past Sins Printing Is Available · 2:12am Jul 23rd, 2018

So, as some folks have been messaging over the past few days, a certain website has put up for purchase new copies of Past Sins.

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Mar
14th
2018

Starfleet Nemesis Prologue 2: Starla's Mommy Issues · 6:34pm Mar 14th, 2018

The second prologue of My Brave Pony: Starfleet Nemesis has been revised and updated, as Rainbow angsts, Lightning broods, Fluttershy (finally) demonstrates the inner strength that various characters insist she has but I always forgot to show on the page, and Starla gives us a charming glimpse into her feelings:

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Apr
17th
2018

Being a Better Writer: When Do You Publish? · 9:35pm Apr 17th, 2018

We’re going to do a shorter one today, folks, so that I can get back to editing (post-edit: It was not that short). Or rather, I’m going to keep it short. So that I can get back to, well, my bit in the topic at hand. Because this is the process I’ve been going through for a few weeks now.

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Dec
10th
2017

Coming back · 1:55pm Dec 10th, 2017

I've been out on a long hiatus because I was trying to get my Job Corps shit together. We start break on the 15th and by then I'll be continuing to edit Ruby and then I might make another quick short story for Hearths Warming. I have enough time for it. And there my be another story out for a special day coming up as well but I don't know if I'll write it or not. I'm kinda sick of writing "special day" stories. They don't get enough love from a certain someone.... Anyways, I don't have that

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Mar
20th
2017

Revision · 5:56am Mar 20th, 2017

I spent the last hour or so rewriting the first chapter of Foal Fable And it is much better. I hope it floats better with readers and won't kill your eyes. XD

Jul
31st
2020

Books (and energy) running out! · 6:35pm Jul 31st, 2020

The first edition of my Lovely Darkness book is sold out (I had been taking orders in the comments below). Due to medical reasons, I don't know when I'll be able to revise the book for Lulu so it may be a while before I'm able to sell again. Hopefully before January I can finish the update, but no promises.

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Aug
4th
2015

Vote for Story Changes in An Angel from the Deep · 4:55am Aug 4th, 2015

Ugh, I can't make up my mind! Guess I need some help

Do I wait until I finish the story to do editing or Should I do editing now before the story is finished?

Please comment down below what you think is best.

Remember, if I edit this now, there might be some minor changes story-wise. Hopefully not too much that it will make it confusing for the reader.

Jun
14th
2018

Requests closed · 1:12am Jun 14th, 2018

As the title says, the time to request has come to an end. Though I should have posted this sooner. All slots have been filled, all notes have been taken down, and I will get to all requests as soon as I can. When I start working on your story you will know it, as I will send a private message with the segment I have covered.

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Mar
12th
2019

Magisight: Thaumaturgical Ocularity Chapter 2, 3 + Life Updates · 11:44pm Mar 12th, 2019

I would have made a blog post to hype chapter 2 last week, but I was sick! I woke up ill on Tuesday morning and although I wasn't completely bed-ridden, it definitely sapped a lot of motivation. I'll be sure to reply to some of the comments/favorites that have popped up since then as soon as I can. Thankfully, I am now feeling better, even if it's almost a whole week later...

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