Interlude is back up again now better than ever!

The rewrite for The New StalLi-ion is almost done, I just need to self-edit it, and send it on its way.

Expect it either tomorrow or the day after tomorrow. Once I'm done that then I get working on the chapter 2 rewrite.

So I know this is late, but I just wanted to say that the prologue of The Everfree Files- book one: the Gunslinger is out right now! I plan on rewriting the first few chapters that were originally released and then continuing the story from there. The prologue itself went from a 1000 word chapter to a 4000 word chapter, and there is more to come from here on out as a fire has been lit inside of me. I hope you all enjoy, this is Silvermoon signing off...PEACE OUT!

The fourth and final chapter in the set of rewrites is finally complete! Check the completed chapter out here.

I am deleting the Enigma of Indigo Moon as I am not happy with its current state and I have some rather large changes I wish to make, resulting in a giant hassle if I were to just go in and edit it. Most of it will be similar, but the writing will be better (hopefully) with more detail and less one-line paragraphs.

The basic plot will remain the same as well: Indigo goes from scientist to criminal as a result of his adventure. Some of the bigger changes include:

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Okay, I made better progress this time, but still not good progress.

I've basically upgraded from rewriting an entire paragraph for two weeks, to rewriting an entire scene for two weeks. Granted, it was a fairly large scene, over 2,200 words in length, but still just one scene.

Still I guess it's measurably better than last week, which means your abuse must have had some degree of effect. So please, feel free to hurl more of it my way this week to help me stay motivated.

After taking some time reflecting on the breakdown that was my deletion of what could have been the next chapter of The Soldier and his Rider a thought came out; What if I started fresh in a different perspective? One issue I find myself with this series is that I constantly insert lore from other worlds that my sister and I created when this series was suppose to be a fish-out-of-water story where a British Great War soldier and his horse explore the world of Equestria. Sadly, I feel that is

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Hai.

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I'm deleting the old chapters, though if you still want to read them (don't know why you would, they're terrible), they'll be available on Wattpad when I'm done.

Side note: I deleted the Among Us mechanics which were cringe inducing, even to me. And that one friend who is so cringe we call him Cringe-na

It finally happened! Someone gave me such valuable feedback on how to improve a story, I yanked the story to do a thorough rewrite.

The story will return.

Thank you, anonymous benecfactorbenefactor!

So I have kinda screwed up with my latest chapter so for the next 24 hours, I'm going to be rewriting it. This means I will need to unpublish Luna's penance so that I can edit it without confusing people as to why its full of unfinished stuff

Don't worry tho it will be back up as a new and improved chapter with NO OOC PRINCESSES WOOOOOO!!!!

Hope ya Bois don't mind BUT when I'm done it will no longer be a smol chapter But a GOOD CHAPTER!

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New heroes, villains, and a new plot. (nope, not that kind) I think it was a little rushed, especially for the amount of time I stopped writing for. What do you guys think? Sky needs the Sky Brigade (the OTHER Sky already used the name Sky Army, so you're the brigade) now!

So, I may or may not have teased a rewrite of Worlds of Destiny (I said "complete; rewrite possible" on my user page), and now, it's in progress. So far, from the intro to the face being sucked into the bell, I wrote 538 words into 1313. I think it's of higher quality.

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As y'all might know, I've been inactive since April of last year. But fear not! I have updated on what's been happening while I've been away. Here's the link if you want to see that.

https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/884619/another-update

TTwo Nymphs, One Pony

• MLP: FiM
• Drama
• Slice of Life

While running errands, Fluttershy finds two abandoned nymphs deep within the Everfree Forest. She quickly decides to take them under her wing.

• Alt. Universe
• Fluttershy
• Thorax
• Pharynx

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Don’t ask why. I rebuilt the chapter, starting from scratch and only really referencing the old chapter. It similar, but their are some differences that I think will add more to the story going forward.

Hello. Some of you might like to know that I've now uploaded The Girl who Didn't Just Live, chapters 10 through 13 rewritten- a little over 12,000 words in all, and it works a LOT better than the stuff before. The first three all shrank- but Chapter 13 gained a few thousand words.

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I finished and published a completely rewritten Chapter 3 of To Bellenast. If you recently read the original version, you have my condolences. It was awful.

I promise the new version is an order of magnitude better. It’s 1/3 the length, has no pointless fight scenes, no plot contrivances, and no unnecessary exposition (there is a teeny tiny bit; I wanted to keep it to the absolute minimum, but these bits are vital).

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Hey, ponies sorry for the lack of updates but I had decided to do another rewrite and rename the story to help differentiate this story and character from another which has the exact same name. this was a poor choice on my part but I couldn't think of a good name at the time and he didn't feature in many stories then either, but recently he has started featuring more and more in my works so I felt it time to rewrite and rename this one!

Chapter 3's rewrite is complete! Check the completed chapter out here.

Basically I would like to start off on good news- I'm making comeback on writing scene (finally) My life has been settled down after going through too much that I won't mention here since I'm a private person in general but YES I'M BACK! I already have like 3 fanfics lined up, ready to be written and submitted. One of them would be brand-new.

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