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May
11th
2016

Critique Review: Retribution · 7:32pm May 11th, 2016


Another fic, another chance for me to go outside with an ice cream bowl, hoping that the mystical Cookies ‘n Cream will fall from the heavens and present itself before me. Only to realize, a few bites in, that it’s actually pigeon shit.

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Aug
5th
2019

My Problem with "DakariKingMykan" · 11:52am Aug 5th, 2019

DISCLAIMER: This is no hateblog. I´m going to tell you my opinion and experience about the author "DakariKingMykan". If there are any Insults in this blog, then they are NOT meant to harrass or damage the named person(s).

Good day, Reader of this blog,
The recent events made me write my thoughts into this blog about the author DakariKingMykan. One or two of you might even know him already, but this blog is mainly for those who don´t know him.

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Dec
4th
2015

What do you think of BLITZ? · 8:06pm Dec 4th, 2015

So I recently published the sixth chapter of BLITZ, and it seems to be running smoothly, but I want to ask you guys this simple question; What do you think of BLITZ?

Feb
5th
2019

Venting, ratings · 6:15am Feb 5th, 2019

I'm tired and I just want to vent for a bit.

A short vent for people who disable likes and dislikes.

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Nov
7th
2021

Critical Race Theory, yo. · 3:55am Nov 7th, 2021

Whites aren't the only ones who want all that critical race garbage done away with. Basically, as most know, CRT is anti-White, but it doesn't stop there. No, it gets much worse, because CRT is pro-Black.

Many non-Blacks don't care about Blacks, did you know that?

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Feb
24th
2021

CRT? · 12:42am Feb 24th, 2021

Critical Race Theory.

It sounds like a plan to make losers feel better about themselves.
"If you're a failure, don't worry, it's just someone else's fault!"

It punishes normal human beings.
"It you're not as pathetic and mentally weak as we are, then you're cheating!!"

When someone tries this, just roll your eyes and walk around. Those things aren't worth your time.
"Loser..." and add a final remark.

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Jan
7th
2021

Bad News. · 4:32pm Jan 7th, 2021

Right after I finished my last blog post, just learned that one of my cousins tested positive for COVID-19. She got it from the Krogers' in Chicago where she works, and even though she was clearly sick, she was apparently told to come in and work anyway. A bad idea by itself, but it gets worse.

How much worse, you ask?

This news led my cousin's parents, my Aunt Susan and Uncle Scott, to visit her. That's also bad, but I'm not done

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Oct
18th
2019

Laughable · 9:11am Oct 18th, 2019

What's wrong with some people these days, eh? You try to post some valid criticism and they block you for it.
Like this guy.
The few of you who see this blog, you know what to do. Stand up for critics and criticism, because people like this guy clearly won't.

Jun
7th
2021

"On education" (repost) · 12:52pm Jun 7th, 2021

I found this theme resonating...

https://www.resilience.org/stories/2021-06-07/on-education/

Moreover, through this educational system where every child is judged by these dominant group standards, we are training our children to aspire to be like that dominant group, to want to join that group, to believe that they are less worthy or even worthless if they are not members of that group — when almost nobody ever joins that group!

Oct
1st
2016

Slightly Rewriting of Beethoven's Tenth · 1:57am Oct 1st, 2016

Okay, before anyone panic's, just hear me out on this.

As of today, the user Ryvaken, after some discussion, have given me some constructive criticism about the story. You see, he basically pointed out that there were a few plot holes that needed to be fixed, which are:

- There's a lack of emphasis of writing the Tenth symphony and Ludwig's obsession to get home is unrealistic.

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Oct
6th
2016

Rewrite Complete · 4:10am Oct 6th, 2016

Dear Bronies and Pegasisters,

After about a week of going through the entire story, of correcting contradictions, adding new details, sentences and paragraphs while rewriting the other half of the previous chapter, I'm relieved to say that it is done. By tomorrow, I can finally begin to work on the next chapter, that is, unless if Ryvaken has any objections.

Your fellow writer and closeted Brony,

- CrackedInkWell.

Nov
26th
2017

Pony Talk Episode 53-Critics and Creators · 10:28pm Nov 26th, 2017

This video may not win me any friends, but it's something that needs to be said

https://youtu.be/Q6hqqKQIml0

Sep
30th
2015

Sequel September: Caverns of Discord · 8:51pm Sep 30th, 2015


Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.

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Apr
27th
2016

Critique Review: Shattered and Heartbroken · 7:55pm Apr 27th, 2016


Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.

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May
18th
2016

Critique Review: Electro Spark · 8:04pm May 18th, 2016

Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.

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Jan
6th
2024

Got my first Threat today. · 2:32pm January 6th

This might seem weird, But I wanted to talk about this anyway.

As some of you may know, Especially if you've read either my Pokemon story or my Blueblood story, you'd know that I'm Israeli.

I do not hide it, I see no reason to.

However, Today I got a hate comment on my most recent "Trash of the Royal Castle" chapter, that was quite antisemitic in its wording.

I think It's a good sign as an author, that most of the criticism of my books has already been said.

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Mar
16th
2016

Critique Review: Nightmare's Parallel · 8:41pm Mar 16th, 2016


Hello, everypony. I am the Critique.

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Dec
5th
2016

Insulting a creation, but not the creator. · 7:29pm Dec 5th, 2016

First of all, for those on you wanting an update on MLAABQ, lemme just quickly tell you that chapter 15 looks like it's gonna be out next Friday (clarification: that means this Friday), with around 10k words. End of MLAABQ-news.

Now:

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Mar
31st
2018

Facehoof · 2:00am Mar 31st, 2018

Normally, I don't criticize the work of other authors here on Fimfiction because I know how utterly horrible I was in the beginning and how much more I have to learn. Sometimes though, I have to vent or my head will pop off my shoulders. This was directed to a story, now deleted, by an author, who is now banned. At least temporarily. The author had eaten a 24hr ban before this apparently for the same story, which they supposedly re-submitted with no edits. Big surprise it got punted again.

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Feb
15th
2018

Civil War of Harmony... Chapter 10. · 5:51am Feb 15th, 2018

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