The Dragon Lands are empty, right? So they make up a new land called The Isle of Scaly where there will be dragons.

Except, why would there be any? Didn't Opaline say she'll do them all?

You know how glasses in the store still have markings hanging off them that let everyone know they haven't been bought yet? Well, it seems Zipp stole her glasses and they are still marked.

Zipp needs her ears to navigate.

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We start off with filthy Misty. Instead of covering up the filled outhouse, she decided to bathe in the filth. And she dragged her friend Izzy with her.
It all starts shaking when Misty farts.
Misty then dunks her head in the fecal matter so that she won't scare Breezies with her ugly snout. Good thinking, Misty.

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Sunny hates birds.
Newspapers hate Sunny. And for some reason, they have glue all over them. Either that or Sunny is slimy.
Sunny is part of the problem.
Sunny must have been living in a cave or a lighthouse for a long time to miss out on reality.
"Zipp track down those litterers!" - Zipp tracks down Sunny right away.
Zipp picks up trash instead of tracking down litterers.

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It starts with Misty. Because of course, it does. She's the villain, I mean hero, of the story, apparently.
Everypony is an Alicorn. For the sake of my sanity, I hope this is just a dream sequence.
Pegassi apparently can't fly. Just Alicorns.
"I just had the worst nightmare. We were all Alicorn OCs."
The last Alicorn? Wait, so Opaline is dead? I thought she was just occupied with curious tree vines.

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My previous commentaries were riddled with my subjective views. So, for this one, I shall only objectivelly describe what I see without commenting and letting my subjectivity getting the better of me. So, here's the objective summary of the above video:

Everypony loves pegasi balls play. Mostly because they can observe them from below.
Sunny observes and gets too distracted to coordinate.

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This entry contains spoilers for Grey Hat. Be warned...

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This entry contains spoilers for Grey Hat. Be warned...

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This something of a surprise. I have gathered nearly 100 followers. In celebration (and partially to get #100), I will be publishing another short work this Monday. Something a bit different but with a familiar character, if you are familiar with my recent stories. Get ready for a bit of snark!

This entry contains spoilers for its corresponding chapter of At the End. Be warned...

Curse these ponies, they drive me to drink.

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This entry contains spoilers for its corresponding chapter of At the End. Be warned...

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This entry contains spoilers for its corresponding chapter of At the End. Be warned...

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This entry contains spoilers for At the End. Be warned...

You remember way, way back when when I said chapter 33 was the hardest to write?

Yeah, move over.

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My commentary:
Is running even allowed by Hitch's own standards?
How can the glasses stay on without being anchored behind his ears?
The hooks of the glasses seemed to have existed so why did he cut them away?
Did somepony eat too much and threw up in the middle of the street? Why is Hitch touching excrements?
Rabbits with horns? I knew rabbits were kinky, but I had no idea...

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I know they're real, because I've seen them before.
I've seen their faces, in the clouds of black smoke rising from the carcass that was once a car.
I've seen their mirages, in the scorching flames illuminating a street covered in broken glass.
I've seen their bodies, camouflaged under the pungent mist of tear gas.

...that's all I have to say.

Foals aren't cool, but Hitch manages it anyway.
Disco ball in a salon.
It would be nice if we'd know if this is a dream sequence. It would be the most obvious explanation.
"Is something they ate a problem?" Eats it...
Flashback. Apparently, this isn't a dream.
The quest for immortality is completed.
Sunny is a biter.
Pipp makes them older. They feel younger...

Homegrown - I don't want to know what her house looks like.
With magic, they don't buy flowers? So they can even produce one-of-a-kind flowers themselves?
And why are flowers homegrown if she can just grow them on the spot?
"There must be some way to help her." - Why don't you just let her sell your shakes for you, Sunny? Don't you have the world to destroy or something?

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Boxing deathmatch? Oh, they aren't boxing gloves, just microphones...
"This is awful." - Indeed.
Assault on the sheriff!
So, why did Pipp let them in?
Okay, bunny extravaganza? So, how did they solve the problem the previous years?
So, the solution is to not let wild animals indoors. Who would have thought...
How are things floating in the air? There isn't any unicorn around...
Charms? Am I missing the context again?

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The thumbnail of the video is something AI would draw while hallucinating.
Everypony was having fun until Misty arrived.
And Misty kills everypony. She's been trying to do that from the start, and now she has finally succeded.
A new kind of toyable pony. I bet her name is Shuriken.
Did she just say, "The land of hardcore quests?" - When you say hardcore, what exactly do you have in mind?

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KHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNN!!!!!!!!

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This entry contains spoilers for its corresponding chapter of At the End. Be warned...

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