What do you think of my writing?

How would you rate my writing?
-I like it
-Its nice
-Not my type
-Could be better
-Not bad
-Fantastic!
-I really like it!
-Awesome
-You're getting there
-Big fan!

The Guild is located several miles underneath the ocean any seal the bubble this underground city where some locals call Atlantis has a tower right in the middle of it's is a massive Tower where it is is built outside of the barrier that keeps the seawater out as it goes up heads to a floating island above the city where it mostly is realize the tourist attraction where are other creatures from around the world goes and has their vacation inside of the city there are several skylines but there

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At least I think so.

My life seems perfect to everyone: I get the top grades, I get along with most people, and I love to laugh.

But it's all a ruse.

I have my vulnerbilities too.

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Okay, so my AU. It’s already apparent that war is a prominent setting in the AU’s story. So, there have to be army/army branches right? Okay then, I’ll tell you about some.

First up, Warsaw.

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For the most part, it's been pretty good! I got to hang out with a friend, and we ate sandwiches and watched Brother Bear 1 and 2. After she left, I made that wolf I told you about yesterday. She was white, and had pretty, green eyes. She was also pretty thicc, since I made her from old lady socks. Today was relaxing, since I didn't have practice today. I spent it watching Netflix. I watched The Exorcist and it was all kinds of fucked up. Then I had an amazing dinner and here I

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So, my AU is ever expanding. Even today it’s growing. So, I decided to go over each 'capitol' of the Prov. So, let’s start of.

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I'm just sick and tired of their shit. Considering the bullshit for the past few weeks, it's just not the same anymore now that my pal left, we were like warriors amongst the other sports leagues up here in DC. Me and him always got each other's back and we fucking held the fields like pros.

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A surprisingly OK movie.

Not meant as an insult, but you can definitely tell that this sucker () was made 96 years ago. A glacial pace, unnecessary repetition, quite a few scenes that made me roll my eyes because I got it five second in but they went on for fifty, unnecessary repetition and...

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Okay, well not the latest locomotive. But I got this around in mid April and it pulls like a animal.

And I do hope it brings about some thumping hearts. Or, I suppose I'll settle for interested hearts.

Note: The Story is, My Journey

God, it feels good to type again. Yes siree, I am back in the swing of things. The creative juices are flowing like water, my new baracks WiFi is laugable, and I've got the 4th of July weekend to go back to being a basement dweller. That means fresh content coming your way.

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With certain games I can have an oddly high amount of luck. and Dark souls is one of the most obvious out of all of them. like today since I wasn't able to go on my computer I decided to actually play on my Xbox which has been gathering dust on top of my dresser. So I play it and after about 15 attempts I finally killed the gargoyles which is really difficult since they spam a wave of fire at you to the point you get stun locked. so I beat them and I get the gargoyle halberd which I didn't know

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I know I can be rather rambly in these, but this time I think I can keep it short and sweet.

Do you like Binding of Issac, but think it got a bit stale after the millionth hour? Or like the concept, but the poop, tears and naked babies aesthetic got too much?

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Short version: This movie is brilliand, deranged, and brilliantly deranged.

You like the original book or just sureal things? Go out on Netflix and watch it now.

If your entire exposure to Alice In Wonderland is that twee Disney thing?

Fly! Fly you fools!

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Had a slow hour today, and realized there's a subject I've yet to breach outside Sufficiently Advanced itself. And even then, only in subtext so far.

The robots coming for our jobs.

Oh, and on a minor but important note: SA might be getting a restructuring soon to make the horrible current description go away in a satisfying manner.

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I was looking forward to a Rarity episode. I had high expectations for a Rarity episode. A Rarity episode reached said high expectations. I don't know what to do with myself anymore. Well, I know that I'm going to share my thoughts on the episode, so that's what I'm gonna do. So, without further ado, here are my thoughts on this week's episode, Rarity Changes Costumes... I mean... Rarity Investigates!

Spoilers. You've been warned.

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After the last time, I was approached by the author, Ether Echoes, and very politely asked to at least read the whole story before slamming it so hard.

And fine, I belive that is the type of manners and patience are things that should be rewarded, so I tried.

Oh god, how I tried.

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I won't go on about it that much. Just wanted to say that it was decent. Had its highs and its lows. Trixie was nice to see, but f*ck was she handled rather poorly. Something about her flavor was off.

Not bad, but not as good as Gauntlet of Fire.

Wanted to use that chapter name for 9 weeks and 3 days.
All my 'comedies' have dumb chapter titles
Lol

Im such a disappointment

now how do i replicate beginnings and endingsssss's success?