Okay, the excitement of air travel is behind us. Theresa can now proceed to meet her parents unscathed.
Looks like I was wrong about Theresa being back on her feet already. Hey, even the best of us are wrong sometimes. Instead, something very unexpected happens. In fact, it’s so unexpected because there was absolutely no evidence to suggest that any such thing would ever happen at any point in the book. Especially not in the second to last chapter! All of a sudden, hundreds of HALs come drifting down out of the sky like little snowflakes. That came out of nowhere. This might be a clever plot
Okay, a lot obsessive. I'm working on my first serious (though still partially a comedy) story in a hot fucking minute, and it's basically six thousand words of Trixie and Starlight talking to each other (and Twilight at the end)
I've always struggled with writing characters accurately. They tend to talk more like I do. For example, Starlight says "I mean" like six or seven times. She does say that phrase at least once from a preliminary exploration, but I need to go deeper.
Alright, I don't want to keep you guys in suspense, so I'll just come right out and say it.
The chapter is FINALLY finished. Spend all of today writing on it, and it will be one of the bigger chapters of the stories. So that's great! 
Sweetie Belle gains a soul —by Bad Dragon
CHAPTER 9:
Four shackles reached out from the metallic circle and snapped at my hooves, replacing the magic bubbles. “Try not to move too much, hehe.”
Again the way she talks and acts sounds like a pedo.
“Psst!” Twilight pressed a hoof to my muzzle. “Who wants to get tested for mana potential?” Her head leaned close to mine, gracing me with a terrifying grin. “You do!” She bumped me on the snout.
This week the life lessons we learned are:
-Do not impersonate cops, they don't like it and will arrest you.
-You could be minding your own business going to the store or walking down the street or whatever and suddenly naked stranger...and you know it's never going to be someone you want to see naked.
I’d never considered myself a Twenty Øne Piløts fan. I was a girl who liked their songs but hadn’t bothered digging into Blurryface and Vessel, both apparently fantastic albums.
But I do have to admit I was a huge fan of Trench, and when I kept hearing Shy Away, the lead single to TØP’s recent studio album, on the local Alternative station, I have to admit, I was rather excited for Scaled and Icy.
How’d that turn out? Well, we’re here now, aren’t we?
Sweetie Belle gains a soul —by Bad Dragon
CHAPTER 3:
The pain in my horn had really worried me since the fall. Fortunately, the hurt mostly subsided. I decided to listen to Apple Bloom’s suggestion and just give my fragile cone some time to heal.
Oh boy! I’ve never heard of a horn called a cone.
But it does seem like an accurate way to describe a unicorn horn.
I have to confess in my initial reactions I seem to have missed these chapters because they are marked as a separate story and I can be a blithering idiot so I present a brand new reaction that I’m sticking into the middle of my other parts of the reaction.
So without further ado:
Chapter 31: Expert on Love
The changeling’s body shook. He swallowed aloud. “Whaa… What kind of questions?”
Considering what these chapter are marked as…….
So, I was thinking of a title for a new story. And, well, it would be a diary story so I came up with the word Diaryetic as in, diary-etic.
Wait, it gets worse.
The full title that popped into my head was going to be The Diaryetic Courtship of Pinkie Pie.
Yeah....
Chocolate rain anyone?
We are sorry to report
Today at this AM hour
Such unfortunate news.
But it's our job, so thusly we announce
Earlier this morning,
An Equestrian died on Earth.
Her name was Whistle Whisp
And she was quite the trailblazer,
But also quite the alcoholic.
Some time last night she drank
And then she tried to fly,
Forgetting that in our world,
There's no magic in the air.
Splat.
Journeyman
Christmas
It's that time again.
The time for the magic of family and adorable kittens.
And let's not forget the horse porn.
I know you're not actually there: this is for a blog post
But if you are there and not responding, fuck you
Still, doubt rampant horse porn of princess will get me top box
Pizor
Lol its 4am you shmuck
Journeyman
Motherfucker you ruined my copypasta
Hahahahahahakill me.
The Spike story I promised everyone is done. And I tried. I kinda tried. A little. He has real feelings as a character. He's a sympathetic role. He has wants, needs, a driving force, and an emotional arch where he learns a lesson in the end which will change his life.
Hello everyone!
I once again have good and bad news. Well at least I hope what I have would be considered to be good news.
Bad News
Bad Honey!!!! Have a hot Sonata as a sorry!
Hiiiiiiiiii!!!!!
I'm super super sorry I totally vanished! Some hard RL snuck up and kicked my cute little tail! Owieeees! Tons and tons of stuff kinda fell on me at once and I couldn't come back here to do what's turned out to be sooooo much fun!
But I have presents for you!!!! Because I <3 you. Apology presents!!!!
So recently, I released a story called "Dance for Her Amusement" and so far, it's literally 50/50. It shares the same amount of likes as it does dislikes and I would love some support, I worked hard for the fic. But that's not why I'm here. I'm here to ask why recent One-Shots I've submitted her only mediocre or bad. What am I doing wrong? What do you think of my most recent stories? What should I work on? What's your opinion on my writing?
I never thought I'd actually be the first person to ever write a canon character, but here I am. My longest oneshot to date, Daydream Warrior, is heading to your computers right now, starring Silverstream in her debut FiMFiction appearance. Even though I actually liked Ocellus a little bit more in the actual premiere, I can't help but be a little honored to be the first to write Silverstream. She really is an interesting character.
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