Read My Fantasy Stories Please

I would really love some feedback on some fantasy stories that I've written in my journals so if you happen to have some time, please give them a read.

They are all relatively short, nothing complicated. So reading them should be a breeze.

Here are the ones I have posted so far.

To Catch A Falling Star: http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/621499/original-story-to-catch-a-falling-star

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Egyptian Mythology: The Doomed Prince

Preface: This story is to be found in the Harris Papyrus in the British Museum. It was complete when first discovered, but an unfortunate accident partly destroyed it, so that the end of the tale is lost. It is supposed to belong to the end of the Eighteenth Dynasty.

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Describes my day very well. This is day five of the fever. At least I'm drinking fluids now. Eating, not so much. I went to the doctor again today. I didn't almost pass out like last time! Pneumonia is fucking terrible. In Ye Olde days, people died of this shit. I'm not even dead, but I feel fucking terrible. I'm lying on my ass, taking pill after pill, and drinking so much fluid. I want to go to school. I want to see my friends. I really fucking want to sing again. I also really

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So this update is late. Like pretty late compared to previous ones, but I'm on holiday so bleh.

"Where are you KendallKun?" I hear the small voice at the back cry. Well small voice, I've finally made my way to weaboo heaven. Yes sir, located just twenty minutes from Akihabara itself, I'm in Tokyo.

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Opened gifts already? A bit bored and want something to numb the pain? Come watch me struggle to hammer out the next chapter!

Now with more regret!

Bad writing here!

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No...just fucking no....

Also, I'll be putting the Christmas Special up either today or this weekend...it's pretty much done...pretty much...

Derpy Whooves wonders why someone like me would ever mingle with those I see as inferior to myself.

Simple. Even God has walked among men. Even royalty has walked among their subjects hidden in the form of a fellow commoner.

If Gods can, from time to time, descend from the Heavens to walk among mere mortals. So, why shouldn't I do the same?

The fact is that I've spent decades hiding among those I would label as animals.

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This story was very difficult to write.

Not a bad story by any means, but it was certainly a unique story and I’m excited to discuss it.

But this story is one of my first song stories in a good long while, so I suppose I have to explain that first.

The beginning of this story goes all the way back to June. So, I’m part of a server that holds routine music nights, and I declared that for June, I was only going to play songs by LGBT+ artists or bands containing LGBT+ members.

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Nightmare Moon
Pros: Well developed yet open to interpretation, (eldritch horror or knight templar?) strong visual design, interesting goals, seriously heartwrenching
Cons: Undermines self, hamminess hard to take seriously at times
#1

Discord
Pros: Incredibly charismatic, pretty funny depending on the writer, rather competent, interesting goals
Cons: Conceptually flawed reformation, villain decay, humor sometimes makes him difficult to take seriously
#6

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I was bored one day and decided to watch four episodes of the Pokemon anime where this character appears:

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PLEASE TELL ME IM NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO HAS ALREADY READ THE HIDDEN ORACLE

spoilers ahead

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U know
That last blog

the ship has sailedd

Fluffquius (or whatever u wanna call it I don’t mind) is a thing

Yes. Arquius. 💙

happy, that's how you made me feel
many times
but now, i feel like you're ignoring me
(couldn't think of a rhyme)

why? you refuse to tell me
though you used to
please answer my question
what did i do?

is it something i said?
is it something i did?

is it something i'm doing?
is it something i'm trying?

you're one of my best friends
or you were
friends don't do this to friends
you're not her

you're not the perky, fun girl i met last year
you're someone i don't know

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I just submitted a new story to the approval cue! We'll hopefully be seeing it soon since it's in the auto-approval cue, and everything about it is in perfect order.

I'm really excited to see what you guys think about it. It's been waiting in the shop for a year, after all; but all good things come to those who wait, especially me, who thrives on the validation I get from all the comments and stuff you guys put out for me.

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I wonder if people are going to hate me... even more, once they find out that I'm probably Cozy Glow's father...

What's with all the talk of variously colored pills?
I say the only good pill is the pill, that keeps your secret relationship a secret. Birth Control!

Mom: WHY IS MY DAUGHTER PREGNANT?!
Son: A miracle? Like Jesus?
Dad: WHO'S THE FATHER?!
*Girl nervously glances at her brother*
Daughter: God?

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