So, you might have noticed I’ve been a bit quiet this week. Well, I’ve had good reasons. Because I’ve been hard at work editing away on Shadow of an Empire, editing page after page after page and getting it ready for its public appearance!
To explain Carlisle and his past to Bella more, Edward takes her into Carlisle’s room, to show her some pictures of the time period. Carlisle himself is still there, reading, and the only reason he doesn’t tell the story himself is because he’s running late. To his job as a doctor. Where he saves people’s lives. BECAUSE HE WAS READING.
As Bella and Edward head back to her house, Edward promptly gives us another reason to hate his guts while listening to the radio:
“You like fifties music?” I asked.
“Music in the fifties was good. Much better than the sixties, or the seventies, ugh!” He shuddered.
So…
…these…
As the weather turns drizzly, Bella and Edward go back to Bella’s house, only to find Jacob and Billy waiting there. Edward reads Billy’s mind and learns that he’s there to warn Charlie about Bella and Edward being together. See, Bella? You should’ve told him earlier. Edward leaves before the Blacks can see him. When Bella enters her house, Billy’s supposedly there to deliver Charlie some fish fry, but he quickly shoos Jacob back to their car under the pretense of looking for a picture so he
The epilogue begins some time after the previous chapter; Bella’s up and about, but her leg hasn’t quite fully healed yet. She’s in a nice dress (dressed and made up by Alice), and Edward’s in a tuxedo, and he’s driving her somewhere, and she doesn’t know where. When she realizes he’s taking her to the prom, she has a hissy fit and actually starts crying before Edward tells her to humor him. Bella still sulks, though:
Technically, this isn’t the first chapter; there’s a few-paragraph “preface” before it. But I only needed to read a few words to know that it was from the climax of the book. Why include it? I don’t know anyone in it, there’s no context, and it’s not long enough to get me invested in an in medias res thing. Also, a hunter is described as “sauntering” to his would-be kill for some reason. I skipped it.
As soon as Bella and her friends get to Port Angeles, dress-shopping ensues. Given the subject matter and book, it’s not as insufferable as you might think it is, and largely skipped over. During the shopping, Bella hears from Angela that the Cullens are often out of school when the weather’s nice, as they frequently go backpacking.
There, I’ve said it. This post has been a long-time coming (it was actually planned for the week after LTUE, but then that big bit of metal fell …) but today we’re finally getting to it. And the title pretty much sums it up.
Been a while since we’ve seen one of these posts! In fact, this is only the second one.
First, I need to express a little bit of disappointment. While I appreciate FanOfMostEverything expressing interest, I was hoping for more than one person responding. With such a lack of a response... honestly, it feels like no one really cares.
That said, the review is something that I really want to do, and this book is one I've wanted to talk about since I first learned about it. To that end, the review is still going to occur. And hopefully, some of you will actually enjoy it.
*cough*
So, if you have checked Princess Celestia: The Changeling Queen, we have a fantastic new cover courtesy of Plainoasis. Seriously, go add him to your deviantart watch list. He is aaaamazing.
Welcome to my review section something that I am hoping can go to add a bit of extra learning and interest in the blog. For this review I'm choosing the most recent book I read; Halo: The Cole Protocol. I'll go over a few points and talk about my general experience reading it and some personal thoughts about the work.
Hey folks! Been much too long since I've released any books, and I'm happy to say that hiatus is over.
Well, I guess I'm a bit late for my own Poll's results. Hehe, um, sorry for the delay everypony, I got a bit hung up with other things and time just slipped away.
Oh don't give me that!! I just forgot alright!! *Ducks behind desk as tomatoes and other squishy fruits sail overhead* Alright! Alright! Ceasefire!
So.... Uh it looks like my story is finally out lols. Please check it out guys, I'll leave a link here
hope you'll all enjoy it. :)
Well, it took a bit longer than I wanted, but I finally finished updating the FIMFiction versions of the stories in the Fleeting Light series—and caught like three more errors in the printed version—so the book is now officially for sale!
You can find it here on Lulu. I've added this link to each of the story descriptions as well.
Hello, everyone!
Reminder that orders for the 2nd print run of Sensation are ending soon. Please fill out this form if you'd like a copy!
https://forms.gle/KszxGChk4Q1QujU4A
I plan on sending out invoices later this week, so don't delay! I need to put in my order soon so that it will be ready in time for Ciderfest.
Thanks!
Vivid
Did you know that Rainbow Factory violates Youtube’s “Sex and Nudity” content policy?
That bot of theirs has to be one kinky motherfucker if it finds anything in that story sexy.
Hey readers! Max here with a quick news update for all of you! One that’s about to deliver some truth to the phrase “a picture is worth a thousand words.” Are you ready? Here you go!
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