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Sep
22nd
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #10 — Red Apples · 1:06am Sep 22nd, 2015

Aug
3rd
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #5 — Painted Jack · 7:20pm Aug 3rd, 2015

Feb
5th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #39 — The Last King · 8:29pm Feb 5th, 2020

Jan
2nd
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #35 — The Joy Hive · 6:17am Jan 2nd, 2020

Dec
27th
2019

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #34 — She Kills Monsters · 12:57am Dec 27th, 2019

Nov
21st
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #1 · 1:18am Nov 21st, 2015

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

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Feb
15th
2016

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #4 · 10:03am Feb 15th, 2016

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

It Must Be Tuesday by Foals Errand (based off chapter 1 only):

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Dec
30th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #29 — The Mage and the Filly Fair · 6:31am Dec 30th, 2016

Apr
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #25 — Dash Academy (Webcomic) · 5:20am Apr 24th, 2016

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At the time of this review, the story is on the final chapter, but not complete.


Title: Dash Academy (also hosted on the user’s deviantart page)

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Jul
19th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #3 — Lies to Foals · 12:37am Jul 19th, 2015

Jan
28th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #20 — The Savage Way · 10:20am Jan 28th, 2016

Jan
7th
2017

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #7 · 10:38pm Jan 7th, 2017

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

"Applejack, Are We Poor?" by InsertAuthorHere:

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Mar
11th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #41 — In the Moon’s Platinum Glow · 8:08am Mar 11th, 2020

Jan
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #17 — Persephone · 3:37am Jan 24th, 2016

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I now take review requests. Check this blog for current status of requests, and guidelines to make your own!


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Jan
12th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #15 — The Writing on the Wall · 9:43pm Jan 12th, 2016

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Today's story relies heavily on its twist/reveal. I have made as much effort as possible to not spoil said reveal, but this is a difficult story to critique while avoiding spoilers.


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Dec
11th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #14 — There is no Luna · 12:16am Dec 11th, 2015

Mar
31st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #3 · 9:42am Mar 31st, 2016

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

Today, we look at a set of stories, based solely on their descriptions, titles, and other relevant paratext.

The Alicorn Curse by chillbook1
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Jan
25th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #18 — Bitter-Sweetie · 7:41am Jan 25th, 2016

Jun
6th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #27 — Palimpsest · 11:17pm Jun 6th, 2016

Jan
21st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #16 — So You've Just Slept With Your Best Friend · 12:42am Jan 21st, 2016

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