Spit & Polish: Fluttershy's Mean Streak · 9:19pm Apr 2nd, 2016
Brass Polish presents some thoughts, jokes, and observations on a real kick-ass pony.
Brass Polish presents some thoughts, jokes, and observations on a real kick-ass pony.
Alright guys, the 6 most recent chapters of Stuck have been edited and polished! So, now, I'm gonna be finishing up the next chapter and try to post that whenever I can. THEN, I'm gonna go back and add some dialogue variation. I might ask a friend to help me out with that.
So guys, thank you so much for your patience!
Don't forget to love each other!
'til next time!
-NickyD
So guys, chapter 10 "Lunch Time" is polished, edited, re-written, etc. Be sure to check it out and leave some constructive criticism. Enjoy the updated chapter guys.
Don't forget to love each other
'Til next time!
-NickyD
So after that last blog post, I found my inspiration to re-edit once more. The writing inspiration, I am unsure about, but it's a step in the right direction.
So, I finished editing "Exercise is Fun" up to "Stuck". Then there's six more chapters to edit, then I got to go back and re edit once more to add some variation because the story lacks some of that.
Well guys, I'm slowly getting back into it! I'll let you know of the next update when it happens!
I just found this.
If you're a native Polish speaker, a translator duo on Twitter by the handle @ImperOminosum has been translating Pegasus Device into Polish. You can find it here, if you'd like.
They have a Ko-Fi link here, so send them some love if you really enjoyed the translation!
Man, I'm going through these chapters and I am finding it very hard to read them. Seriously, how do you guys find this as good literature.
Anyway, I have revised chapters four, five and six. Take a look, they should be much better and cleaner. Enjoy guys!
Don't forget to love each other.
'til next time
-NickyD
Alright fackbois, chapters 7 - 9 have been updated and polished. They should look more decent now. Don't expect this to be a daily thing though. I'm doing these at work, and business is slow at the moment. Tomorrow is Monday and throughout the week, I'll be up to my eyeballs in assignments and other things. But hey, during the past week, I was able to polish up and improve the first nine chapters. Feeling really good about these edits. Enjoy guys!
Brass Polish presents some thoughts, jokes, and observations on the fandom’s foreleg candy.
My good friend Sapphire Scroll is going to be streaming himself translating Pegasus Device: Reckoning into Polish tomorrow (January 3rd), starting at 02:00 (AM) EST, and should be going to 19:00 (7PM) EST.
He'll also be playing readings of other grimdark fanfictions at the same time, so stop by and keep him some company! I'll be popping in as well for the second half!
Hey guys!
Sorry for the long silence, my life has been filled with looking for a new job, so things have been rather hectic these past few weeks. But don't worry, everything is fine. Like every responsible adult, I have prepared for such a scenario, so I can at least live comfortably the rest of the year without things getting hectic. Although I still want a job before then.
ANYWAY!
So I have been re reading 'Stuck' lately and, let me just say... bruh. It is SO bad! Seriously, how does this thing have 99 up votes again? The plot is fine, but the execution is just so god damn awful. The dialogue is very messy, the show and not tell aspect isn't super prominent, I'm using parenthesis too often, character interactions are not well executed, I am disappointed in my 17-18 year old self. A 17-18 year old who took HONNORS english his junior year. I thought I was writing a good
We’re going to do a shorter one today, folks, so that I can get back to editing (post-edit: It was not that short). Or rather, I’m going to keep it short. So that I can get back to, well, my bit in the topic at hand. Because this is the process I’ve been going through for a few weeks now.
The One-Sentence Summary
There's nothing exciting about probably being related to Silver Spoon[.]
The Substance
Okay guys, I updated the Cadence and Shinning Armor chapter and half of Exercise Is Fun. I'll tackle the rest of that one at some other point. Not sure when though.
This color, to be more specific. My day has been pretty good. I ate a bagel sandwich with cream cheese and prosciutto. Have I ever told you that I like to fuck bagels? I'm bad, I'm bad, I know.
https://www.equestriadaily.com/2017/09/sneak-peak-of-my-little-pony-movie.html
Well, that was an unexpected plot twist after I wrote Equestria's Got Talent a month ago. Next thing you know, the one child singer left will place fourth like Rara did in the story...