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Jul
7th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #1 · 4:29pm Jul 7th, 2015

One thing I like about the FIM fanfic fandom is the abundance of reviewers and critique available. It helps authors grow, helps other authors learn from their mistakes, and helps inform readers of stories they may like or dislike.

I generally avoided being one of those reviewers for a long time. I usually preferred a direct dialogue with the author, so my critique would often take the form of a lengthy comment directly on the story in question.

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Mar
3rd
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #23 — If Memory Serves by Pascoite · 5:19am Mar 3rd, 2016

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Today’s story uses not one, but two twists. Since the first twist is fairly obvious (perhaps intentionally so), I have not bothered to spoiler-tag it.


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Oct
30th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #11 — Bonafide · 4:57am Oct 30th, 2015

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Today’s critique is another “retro” one. It is an adaptation of a comment I already made, on a story I have already read, rather than completely new material based on a recent read.

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Mar
29th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #24 — It Feels... Wrong. · 12:13am Mar 29th, 2016

Nov
29th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #2 · 3:26am Nov 29th, 2015

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

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Aug
17th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #6 — To Be A Mule · 6:36am Aug 17th, 2015

Mar
17th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #42 — Seneschal · 11:08pm Mar 17th, 2020

Feb
10th
2017

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #30 — Gnosis · 7:59am Feb 10th, 2017

Feb
12th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #22 — Changeling Courtship Rituals · 3:29am Feb 12th, 2016

Jun
26th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #28 — Indigo Hooves · 4:01am Jun 26th, 2016

Nov
13th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #13 — Why Don't You Tell Them? · 6:42am Nov 13th, 2015

May
5th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #26 — The Hays Code · 2:24am May 5th, 2016

Sep
8th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #8 — The Sun's Torment · 12:57am Sep 8th, 2015

Jan
27th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #19 — Old Friends · 10:12am Jan 27th, 2016

Jul
22nd
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #44 — The Rise Of Chaos · 10:24am Jul 22nd, 2020

We finally return to my series of critiques about the ISII entrants. We continue down my list of “finalists”: stories which I considered awarding points to. I would like to stress, however, that I only ranked them because FanOfMostEverything made me; they are all excellent.

I've suspected for a while that I would not be able to critique every story in the contest. At least not in long form. I suppose we'll cross that bridge when we get there.

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Dec
21st
2019

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #33 — Fang and Flame · 11:21pm Dec 21st, 2019

Jan
30th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #38 — Miles to Go · 7:49pm Jan 30th, 2020

Nov
21st
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #1 · 1:18am Nov 21st, 2015

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

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Dec
30th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #29 — The Mage and the Filly Fair · 6:31am Dec 30th, 2016

Apr
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #25 — Dash Academy (Webcomic) · 5:20am Apr 24th, 2016

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At the time of this review, the story is on the final chapter, but not complete.


Title: Dash Academy (also hosted on the user’s deviantart page)

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