A friend just got into reading KAPT, and noticed some issues with it...

Apparently I had started describing Pearl with a grey coat, due to her attempt to get close to a mother-of-pearl tone, only to then describe her as a green pony in later chapters...
So that's fixed.

There were a few spelling errors and some grammar she pointed out, so those are fixed...

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A great man once said, "The author that proofreads his own work has an fool for an editor."
This is why I am here for reasons you are aware of.

The story is an alternate universe story about a Museum called The Final Resting Place, a changeling by the name of Professor Karma, and a Pegasus named Scootaloo (whom you likely know). The Professor learns a lesson, Scootaloo has a destiny, and you'll have to read to find out more (wink wink).

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I did some edits to the latest chapter of Reflection of Nightmares

In addition to mostly fixing Zecora's rhymes, I've also changed some dialogue a tad and added some author's notes. Anyway, thank you for reading!

I am now in the process of editing the story 'Bat Pony Marriage Rituals'. Expect the chapter 'The Rituals' to have the most edits and changes as it is the one chapter that needs a lot of more context for the story to be better paced and more understanding about the ritual itself. First chapter 'The Proposal' is finished with editing but the other two chapters will be finish by tomorrow.

I’ve add more to the extensions of Chapter 6! Enjoy what I’ve added!

Changed the number of people in the group at that point in time from 57 to 8.
I have to stop pretending I can actually write that many characters competently, and also, most of the ponies in the place aren't actually members, they're townsponies staying out of the cold for not frozen farmland.

So, i have been helping RainbowSparkle3 with his newest story over the past few days, and i gotta say, it has been quite the experience.

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Chapter 6 of Pearl's Travels: Canterlot has had some edits to add to the story's exposition.
It's especially noticeable in the last part, and I do hope it reads better now.

I'm listening to feedback I receive, but I don't always receive it on FIMFiction. Please do keep sending your constructive criticism my way, though.

Hey everyone,

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And yes, this is the same editing as the last image.

Probably could’a done more, but I’m lazy

I am pleased to announce that Mum's the Word is once again updated! Thanks to Word Worthy All three chapters have been edited once more for your reading pleasure.

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Just a quick update for peoples and ponies and whatever-else you may be.

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'allo 'allo.

The story...is done? I’m not really sure. My stomach has been doing back-flips today. Maybe it’s all the coffee I’ve been drinking...maybe not.

Been going through the whole story today and considering what I want to add, change or needs reconsidering. There's editing I want to do to it and have been doing today. Which will continue throughout the week. Soooo, everything is there, but there’s things to add and or change around.

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Formatting of the various chapters is mostly corrected. For whatever reason there is a very rare issue in just a few chapters where it is plainly utterly impossible to make things sit or connect or disconnect the way they are supposed to. They may not even appear to be incorrect to others (but they are blatantly obvious to myself.) If noticed those instances will have to be ignored

Excerpts from Chapter 10: I Walk A Lonely Road.”

Original:

Edited:

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Made a slight error in my latest chapter but managed to fix it. Feel free to reread at your disclosre.

So... I would go to Looking for Editors, but I feel like I've been there far too many times asking for help.

So I'm wondering if any of ya'll know any editors, or can offer said editing services. What I need it a Perma-Editor, someone I can rely on to call forth and edit the trash I call a story.

You don't even have to be a straight up mega boss of an editor, just I need someone who can go through my works and fix up typos, errors and offer some advice on how to make it better.

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Wow, it's been a long time since I touched this account. Even though I am not into the MLP fandom like I used to be, I've been thinking of going back and editing my stories. That way, those who enjoyed my writing back then can get an updated version. Hopefully with fewer spelling errors. Lol. I'm going to leave the originals how they are right now and just make new ones with the same title, that way I can have both of them on this account. I'll be starting with "A Shadowed Past" since that was

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Some people have decided to start reading my stories with critical eyes and are pointing out problems with them. THANK YOU for pointing them out!

Please keep sending me messages when you see something I can improve upon.
I'm still looking for dedicated editors to (p)review my story chapters properly.

Well then I've got good news for you!

For the low-low price of $5 per thousand words (rounded to the nearest thousand. Don't send me 1,999 words thinking you've cheated the system), I will edit your stuff. Really!

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