Update on first Chapter and a deleted Scene · 6:21am Oct 11th, 2016
Still working on the first chapter - work has been slow, especially since it is sometimes hard to decide between things to keep and to remove completely, because they do not fit into the "flow". I hope I made the right decision with the last thing I changed.
Still, the scene I deleted contained a nice theory. I don't want to remove it completely, so I will just post it here: