Pony Talk Episode 17-Diamond Tiara's Redemption · 9:04pm Apr 3rd, 2016
So let's talk about Diamond Tiara's redemption...in song! I mean, the songs from the show. I will not be singing.
So let's talk about Diamond Tiara's redemption...in song! I mean, the songs from the show. I will not be singing.
Whew! Was gonna wait until the middle of the week, but was too excited to keep this in any longer!
This was one of those 'tentpole' chapters that was like the dessert at the end of another meal-course. I had to 'slog' through some character development and not-so-hot storytelling to get here, but I'm pretty sure it'll find some fans and get some cheers (though I'm sure I'll be met with plenty of 'meh's.').
Hey everypony!
I just released a new chapter and three epilogue chapters for my story Through the Eyes of Anon-a-Miss. After a full year, the story is now officially complete!
If you haven't seen the new (and last) chapters yet, or those of you who rather wait until this story is completed, you may check it out right now!
So, episode four, it happened, I think this could be the start of an awesome friendship and maybe something even more when they get older! The story for this episode is, now that the CMC have their cutie marks, they don't need to do everything together anymore. Apple Bloom takes it as "I don't think we should ever hang out together anymore." She sets out to try all the things they did as the CMC when they were searching for their cutie marks by herself. Eventually she tries dancing, and meets a
Well, kind of flew through this chapter, but hope it has some nice, emotional moments to it.
I did struggle with it for a bit, because I felt it could have become very 'talky.' Because of that (and fearing it'd easily go over 10,000 words), I decided to 'streamline' the chapter, with summaries, and giving characters dialogue, when I felt it was necessary.
ACCUSATION: That Celestia has allowed a little Pegasus Filly with a crippling disability to remain in that state without using her powers to heal her. (AKA, why has Celestia not healed Scootaloo?)
RESPONSE: Manifold... in 3 basic parts. "healing", "powers", "disability"
Hey there...so I'm still alive. Just not as active here as I'd like to be. A few quick updates.
1. I haven't exactly been trying to write anything new for a while...curse my lack of motivation.
2. I lost a job, lost my car and got a new job since the last update. Oh yeah and this virus thing happened too.
Sometimes problems just keep coming from all sides, until they tangle, forming one giant mess. When that happens, then sooner or later, someone will have to cut the Gordian knot no matter how difficult that may be. John, Cheerilee and Scootaloo are about to do just that.
In other words, it's time for the next chapter:
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P.S.
For the month of January we have some pretty nice updates and a spicy new story. I'm excited to hear your thoughts.
First of all, the new story:
Sweet Siren Seashell Switch-Up - Insanity is doing the same thing over and over expecting a different outcome. Greed is letting someone do it until they have nothing left... Or maybe they do.
I'm so sorry for not putting out Chapter 2 as promised again. The week I went through was mostly hell. My former roommate was making me problems and caused me a lot of emotional stress with that, my Internet connection at home broke (and I can only write this now because I bought a used netbook on Friday so that I won't miss the new episode, with which I can use public W-LAN outside of my apartment) and my provider told me they can only send a technician to look for the problem on
Warning: Spoilers abound. Proceed with caution.
Let me just start off by saying great googily moogily, what a weekend this was! I thought Season 7 had scheduling problems, but this was just insane! Well, at least it's still trackable. Unlike some other shows I can mention *cough*TheLoudHouse*cough*.
I don't remember much but all I can remember is that scootaloo was hanging out with rainbow dash constantly, and it was making her mother upset cause she thought or 'claimed' rainbow dash died, and when scootaloo bought her home her mother tried to attack/kill RD but when her father (i think) stopped her she sat them down and explained something about Scootaloo's original dead sister (I think she showed a grave or a picture and she died in a flying accident?)
This'll probably be my last spontaneous oneshot for a little while (considering I've posted six stories this week, that's still not too shabby!), but I think people will enjoy this one! I wanted it to feel like an episode of the show, and I feel like I've managed to capture a good few of the elements that make that up.
Could these campfire stories be more than just legends?
Lest we forget the wonderful artist who has made a lot of nice art possible, Mutter_Butter comes back at it again to finish up the empty few chapters that didn't get to see an illustration despite the many good moments they had going on. Maybe you recognize the moments they come from? Here, have a look.
"Captain Scootaloo and her crew"
Grading Scale:
A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)
Grading Scale:
A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)
Hello, deer pony readers!
To those of you who only recently started watching me: hello, hope you find the experience enjoyable. If not, no hard feelings.