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Jan
16th
2022

An Extremely Critical Review of Arcane · 1:37am Jan 16th, 2022

Jul
25th
2019

Bad Book Review 11 (The Guardian, Chapter 13) · 7:25pm Jul 25th, 2019

I'm starting to doubt the idea of reviewing the entire book. I may just finish the first story, then give single post summaries of the other two.

Anyway, last time, we were actually given some backstory for are killer angel, learning he was once a human child that had been forced to fight in a war at the age of six.

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Nov
21st
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #1 · 1:18am Nov 21st, 2015

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

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Feb
15th
2016

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #4 · 10:03am Feb 15th, 2016

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

It Must Be Tuesday by Foals Errand (based off chapter 1 only):

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Dec
30th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #29 — The Mage and the Filly Fair · 6:31am Dec 30th, 2016

Mar
3rd
2016

Secret inspiration!? · 4:38pm Mar 3rd, 2016

I actually kinda remembered watching these when I was younger. They were mostly around sports, very few around other things, but I guess, in some weird way, if I traveled back in time to meet my younger self, I'd tell myself "Use these for something involving a Superhero/Supervillain named Deadpool, with a lot of blood and ponies."

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Aug
3rd
2017

Birthday stuff that happened yesterday. · 1:53pm Aug 3rd, 2017

Besides two videos from people I watched, went with my mom to a place called Pha, a Vietnamese restaurant where we get their bowls of soup. She was supposed to give me a Nintendo 2SDXL, but forgot her Target Credit Card. Will probably get it on the 8th this months.

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Sep
1st
2015

The problem with Stripes · 2:08am Sep 1st, 2015

While my big "flagship" story fan fiction thingymadoo hasn't even begun to come close to the point at which I can hype it with blogs, I still feel like my first one should be relevant to it. Specifically, the reason why I don't make much progress on it.

Oh no, an author with basically zero fame and/or credibility has a problem! How tragic!

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Apr
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #25 — Dash Academy (Webcomic) · 5:20am Apr 24th, 2016

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At the time of this review, the story is on the final chapter, but not complete.


Title: Dash Academy (also hosted on the user’s deviantart page)

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Jul
19th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #3 — Lies to Foals · 12:37am Jul 19th, 2015

Jan
28th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #20 — The Savage Way · 10:20am Jan 28th, 2016

Jan
7th
2017

cleverpun's Concise Critiques #7 · 10:38pm Jan 7th, 2017

Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.

"Applejack, Are We Poor?" by InsertAuthorHere:

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Mar
11th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #41 — In the Moon’s Platinum Glow · 8:08am Mar 11th, 2020

Jan
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #17 — Persephone · 3:37am Jan 24th, 2016

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I now take review requests. Check this blog for current status of requests, and guidelines to make your own!


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Jan
12th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #15 — The Writing on the Wall · 9:43pm Jan 12th, 2016

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Today's story relies heavily on its twist/reveal. I have made as much effort as possible to not spoil said reveal, but this is a difficult story to critique while avoiding spoilers.


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Dec
11th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #14 — There is no Luna · 12:16am Dec 11th, 2015

Jul
30th
2019

Bad Book Review 15 (The Guardian, Chapter 17) · 2:08am Jul 30th, 2019

And so we reach, the final chapter. The one where everything is supposed to culminate and wrap up. In this case, both the climax, and the denouement.

A lot of pressure for FOUR PAGES, don't you think?

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Jul
20th
2020

Being a Better Writer: Being Your Own Worst Critic · 11:52pm Jul 20th, 2020

Aug
23rd
2019

The Animation Community Isn't Dying | Rant · 7:49pm Aug 23rd, 2019

Mar
30th
2017

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #32 — La Da Dee (PMV) · 7:35am Mar 30th, 2017

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I have reviewed some things that don’t traditionally receive deep criticism. I’ve done full length reviews of porn and a webcomic, for instance. Today, we add a Pony Music Video (PMV) to that list.

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