I'm starting to doubt the idea of reviewing the entire book. I may just finish the first story, then give single post summaries of the other two.
Anyway, last time, we were actually given some backstory for are killer angel, learning he was once a human child that had been forced to fight in a war at the age of six.
The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.
Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.
It Must Be Tuesday by Foals Errand (based off chapter 1 only):
I actually kinda remembered watching these when I was younger. They were mostly around sports, very few around other things, but I guess, in some weird way, if I traveled back in time to meet my younger self, I'd tell myself "Use these for something involving a Superhero/Supervillain named Deadpool, with a lot of blood and ponies."
Besides two videos from people I watched, went with my mom to a place called Pha, a Vietnamese restaurant where we get their bowls of soup. She was supposed to give me a Nintendo 2SDXL, but forgot her Target Credit Card. Will probably get it on the 8th this months.
While my big "flagship" story fan fiction thingymadoo hasn't even begun to come close to the point at which I can hype it with blogs, I still feel like my first one should be relevant to it. Specifically, the reason why I don't make much progress on it.
Oh no, an author with basically zero fame and/or credibility has a problem! How tragic!
At the time of this review, the story is on the final chapter, but not complete.
Title: Dash Academy (also hosted on the user’s deviantart page)
Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.
"Applejack, Are We Poor?" by InsertAuthorHere:
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Today's story relies heavily on its twist/reveal. I have made as much effort as possible to not spoil said reveal, but this is a difficult story to critique while avoiding spoilers.
And so we reach, the final chapter. The one where everything is supposed to culminate and wrap up. In this case, both the climax, and the denouement.
A lot of pressure for FOUR PAGES, don't you think?
I have reviewed some things that don’t traditionally receive deep criticism. I’ve done full length reviews of porn and a webcomic, for instance. Today, we add a Pony Music Video (PMV) to that list.