I wasn't entirely sure until I looked at it again one more time. I think I may have discovered the reason for my story Unique Worlds not going so great.
1. Spelling
2. Wording
3. Punctuation
I need to fix these things. I will be working as best I can on these so every now and then you may or may not see a change in the chapters. I'm off to work!
This is from Sock It To Me and goodness gracious! That sock has to be the nastiest thing I've ever seen since the episode where Ed keeps a piece of stinky cheese in his jacket pocket. I guess Bulk and Ed never practice proper hygiene and/or do their laundry at all. 
according to a equestria daily recent article a rep from hasbro reported that another mlp movie will be released some time this month next year that in said report the movie takes place in equestria and is suppose to bridge the gap between g4 and g5 so as this article goes g5 takes place in the same universe as friendship is magic after an undisclosed amount of time has past it also seems that the g5 series will either begin before or after the movie is released in sept-oct 2021
Actually it's 12:30... which is only 11 hours until "A Flurry of Emotions" comes out!
Z-Ray goggles?
points them at Hitch.
"Ow, my sperm!"
I was honestly not expecting today's TYT episode to remind me of the Lilac staring meme.
But alas, here we are.
Good night, everypony.
WARNING: MAKE YOUR MARK CHAPTER 6 SPOILERS AFTER THE BREAK!
With “The Moon Rises”!!!
I heard the song for the first time in a reaction video 2 days ago. Yesterday I watched the uninterrupted version and I am in love with her vocals!!! I listened to it on repeat (and Lullaby for Princess which I had heard years ago) while commuting to College and I can’t stop mentally belting the song!!!
I. AM. IN. LOVE!!!
🎶Now the hour has come at last dududududu…
Wow.
^ Me, impatiently waiting for MYM Chapter 6.
Spoilers for Make Your Mark Chapter 5 below the break!
Good evening, everypony!
I've registered for Extra Life 2023, and my gold medal for 2022 is on the way.
I've decided my first stream of the year is going to be the launch of the Dead Space remake, which releases on Friday.
I'm talking lights off, surround sound headset, and see how creepy this game is compared to 2008.
Hope to get some more writing done between now and then. Next story to be updated is Forgotten: Crystal Princess.
Grading Scale:
A (fantastic episode)
A- (an excellent episode with at least one flaw)
B+ (a great episode with a couple of flaws)
B (a good episode which still could have been better)
So, remember when I said Amy Keating Rogers is not a perfect writer. Well, this is one of those times where her writing is not as strong as it could've been. Don't get me wrong. This is still a good episode. There are a lot of hilarious jokes, some of the commentary is actually clever, and the message, while pretty overdone, is still a timely one. With that said, the episode does suffer from a lack of subtlety, and some of the characters do have a few annoying moments here and there. It's
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