Name: In the pursuit of the light
Genre: Sci-fi(?), adventure, drama
Length atm:

 1068 Chapter01
 1058 Chapter02
 1066 Chapter03
   63 Chapter04
 3255 total

Planned length: 10k+

Premise:
A story loosely based on the human history of space exploration.

I am looking for a pre-reader.
I welcome any help. It would be best if you could point out things in the story that work well or don't work at all.

Important points:

• I'm not a native speaker
• It's my first fic
• Collaboration with an editor will be via GoogleDocs
• The stuff I have right now is very rough, will be refined quite a lot
• I do not plan to post publicly until I have at least a draft of all the chapters
• No clop, crossovers or human stuff are in the plans