Story starters and helpers. 19 members · 2 stories

This is a group that helps other writers when they have a stump, can't come up with an idea, and/or if they are having trouble ending a story as well. If you join this group, which is used to help other writers, all the editors require is a mention of their name in the story, as a reward for their help. When you join, you are promising to not go agianst these rules below:

1. I will not make fun of another person in this group, counting the helpers.
2. I will not stop helping someone if their story is in need of major repair.
3. I will not use profanity to describe someone else.
4. If I procede to help someone, and my name is not mentioned in the story as a helper, I will be mad, but I will not be mad on here.
5. If someone is assaulting my page, I will alert everyone.

I will look for editors to help me out by giving them a page to edit. If it is done correctly, or close to it, I will alert you and give you the job and credit as an editor. If you have failed the first time we will work together and help you out, then I will let you retake it.

I AM HOPING MY TEAM CAN HELP EACH PERSON OUT WITH IN THE GROUP, BY LETTING THEIR STORIES BE HEARD AND HELPED TO IMPROVE THE STORIES.

I stongly agree to these rules, and I will not tolerate making someone feel bad due to how bad their story was written.

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Comment posted by Brony_Falcon deleted Dec 5th, 2013

As the day turned to an ever ending end, Twilight stared at the stars. "ugh, I wish it could be nighte all year long." Twilight stated with a humongus sigh. well I could just ask luna to keep it night, but her thought was broken when Rainbow dahshs's big head poked through the window, "Twilight, wanna try to hang on my back and fly and soar, and zoom across the entire Eqestria?" Stated the Red peagusus. "well maybe," Twilight siad "but I really rather keep my 3 hoofs on the ground, maybe PInkiepie would like to go."

DESCRIBE where Twilight is, for starters. The balcony of the library? Her bed? Be descriptive.

"Quotation Marks" are necessary at some points. Capitalize the start of the quotation, like this. "Well, I could just ask Luna to keep it night..."

Also, make sure to add in periods. They show the reader that they can take a quick breath, or to end a thought. (Example: The cat's eyes gleamed in the half-light at it slowly lifted its paw.) Include punctuation in quotation marks.

Capitalize proper names and first letters in sentences; it isn't a hard concept, but it is important. Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Twilight Sparkle, for instance. DON'T capitalize the first letter at after a quotation unless a period is used to end the thought. (Example: "Twilight, wanna try to hang on my back and fly and soar, and zoom across the entire Equestria?" stated the blue Pegasus.)

Check for spelling errors. Dash, night, Equestria, Pinkie Pie, Pegasus, etc.)

"One, two three, four... five?!" Sweetie Belle counted, gasping before letting out a sigh and then another. Apple Bloom, seeming dizzy and disoriented, landed on her back right next to where the unicorn, who brightened up. "How's the spin coming along?" Sweetie Belle asked her friend. "Ah think ah need ta stick to punches and kicks," Apple Bloom admitted, eyeing the garment in her friend's hooves. "You do know that ponies only have four hooves, right?"
:raritywink: Good luck, founder!

Hey check out new group called Questioning Equestria.

Pretty much that name

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LOL (1st rule broken:pinkiecrazy:)

I like this idea.:twilightsmile:

Fix this paragraph. Many things are messed up, see if you can correct it. Even the Ponies might be stated wrong.

As the day turned to an ever ending end, Twilight stared at the stars. "ugh, I wish it could be nighte all year long." Twilight stated with a humongus sigh. well I could just ask luna to keep it night, but her thought was broken when Rainbow dahshs's big head poked through the window, "Twilight, wanna try to hang on my back and fly and soar, and zoom across the entire Eqestria?" Stated the Red peagusus. "well maybe," Twilight siad "but I really rather keep my 3 hoofs on the ground, maybe PInkiepie would like to go."

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