I wrote 2 chapters of it and then let it... sit. I sorta completely lost my drive to write it and then sorta forgot about it. But, I recently began to start work on it again.

I was sort of discouraged by its low view count and lack of any comments, and that was partly why I stopped work on it. But now that I've resumed work on it, I ask you guys to please read and give criticism of the story so I can be more driven to write it now that I know that people are actually reading it, at least somewhat.

So please, read, and then rip it to shreds.

TThe Demon Comes On Rainbow Wings

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Thriller

Five years after the sky fell and decimated the planet, Rainbow Dash, desperate to get away from Equestria, signs up to fly as a mercenary in a far off war. You may take the sky out of the ace, but you will never take the ace from the sky.

• Violence
• Death
• Profanity
• Crossover
• Alt. Universe
• Rainbow Dash
• OC

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