The Hero... Nightmare Moon? 2,179 members · 319 stories
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4015093 Thanks for the positive criticism, buddy/bro/n*gga/whatever.

Story I took so long to respond; I was watching Nampaikid.

4015105
Winter's fine, and you're welcome.

Also, what?

4015110 I was using the various American slang words that means "pal." Buddy, friend, bro, stuff like that.

Also, Nampaikid is a Chinese guy who does Vines.

4015137
Oh.

Anyway, I Canadian, and call me Winter.

Canadian?

You really are the Prince of the North then...

EH?

OOOOOOUUUU KILL EM.

In all honesty, though, Canadians are cool.

4015158 What is interesting is that I put a read later on your story.

Cuddle thy Night Mare.

This isn't a song, but this instrumental theme I think sums up Nightmare Moon as a character.

4014817
Behind blue eyes

4015625 Thank you.
I always like to think of of Nightmare Moon as a tragic villain,

4015669 I think the same for Lightning Dust.

Hmm. Well, here are my suggestions:

This was the backing track for an excellent SFM animation about Luna's pact with the nightmare forces.

And i found this song as the music for another animation about Luna's 'descent'.
And my all-time favourite, which was the backing track for Children Of The Night.

4014817 I think this fits pretty well.

4015605 I'm glad you used the Limp Biskit cover-the original sucks.

4014817 Paint it Black by the Rolling Stones.

I once wrote a poem/song lyrics, which sums up my headcanon.

How did I get here?
I don't even know anymore.
Nightmare Dreamscape, trapped in space.
Shadows, dancing over the dessert, in their toxic grace.
They are my children and one of them is me.
Where did you picked up the courage, how could you dare?
Tell me, how could you lock away a true nightmare?

Celestia's greatest sin was her own harmony.
In my eyes it feels so wrong.
There is no place for me
In this world, where hate and fear should belong.

Born from a crime
I am supposed to bring eternal night in time.
It is a truth I cannot deny.
But nopony can see.
My destiny is as toxic as a Plunderwhine.
For I am suppose to shatter harmony.

Two princesses are in my way.
One is my enemey, the other is my prey.
Celestia, everyone adores you, but your rules are all lies.
How can they look into your sun with their eyes?
Why do they love the light?
Luna, can't you see?
Your destiny is to help me
in this task to bring an eternal night!


Celestia's greatest sin was her own harmony.
In my eyes it feels so wrong.
There is no place for me
In this world, where hate and fear should belong.

Born from a crime
I am supposed to bring eternal night in time.
It is a truth I cannot deny.
But nopony can see.
My destiny is as toxic as a Plunderwhine.
For I am suppose to shatter harmony.

My beloved subjects, there is not much I require.
Eternal night is my only desire.
The land shall tremble before me
and there will be true balance and harmony.


Celestia's greatest sin was her own harmony.
In my eyes it feels so wrong.
There is no place for me
In this world, where hate and fear should belong.

Born from a crime
I am supposed to bring eternal night in time.
It is a truth I cannot deny.
But nopony can see.
My destiny is as toxic as a Plunderwhine.
For I am suppose to shatter harmony.

The cruel nightmare will bring the end.
The dawn shall never raise again.

If I had to choose a song, then I would take:

4535362
I have never heard this song and now I am glad I have. Thanks for sharing.

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No problem. I found it by accident when I searched Nightmare Moon amv.

I think this song it fits pretty good (i'm also in a warriors cats mood):pinkiecrazy:

Heh heh heh Ivypool :pinkiecrazy:

It's so perfect!:pinkiehappy:

4014817 It would require a big rewrite of the general plot of the show (as well as to an extent the motivations of the characters), but if I could write by own take on both the sisters relationship I'd have them more akin to Ramses and Moses in the Prince of Egypt, in the sense that the roles they take combined with unfortunate events strain their relationship whilst still knowing they're family and not really wanting to fight each other. Personally I think Nightmare Moon's creation would have been stronger had it been born out of a mix of emotions rather than simple jealousy and frustration. If this were a different show with a different theme I would love to see what possible events could have lead to the creation of Nightmare Moon, then have her as a recurring sympathetic villain, neither completely evil nor completely blameless, then when it comes to her redemption have her grow into more of a Gandalf like character, interacting with Twilight more as a second mentor and sharing past experiences and history to the betterment of both characters (and yes I know that parts Lily Peet's idea, but I think its a good one.).

5863657 I like yours I think it's closest to my just listen to my song (above):pinkiehappy:

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