I need help with editing the chapters that I have yet to release for my stories. The stories that I have out have dark, dramatic, and unfair situational undertones in them.

The Experiments is about a guy whose name is Henry that got stolen from his crib as a baby and was tested on by a place called Lab 14. He was changed into a human when he was originally supposed to grow up in Equestria as a unicorn. I have up to chapter 11 released now.

I also need help with 2 other stories of this same type of genre

If you like these types of stories and want to help me out, it would be much appreciated.

7432792

would love to help it sounds interesting
but I don't think I could be of help
bad at grammer

7432801
Seems interesting, maybe I could help. My grammar is decent.