Help in my stories 3 members · 1 stories

Look, I have been having trouble with my stories, the point in God of War: Equestrian Quests and I'm stuck with Chapter 4 and now I don't know what to crack up beyond it, the trouble is: I have been struggling with the pacing build-up and dialogue and personality development of these characters like Kratos and beyond. But this group is not just limited to that story, it is also a group meant to provide me excellent ideas and invaluable assistance in regards to writing any of my future stories, whether it is from grammar, pacing etc. So I'm not force magnetizing anypony, but I simply just need some help on the way to optimize the stories that I write to make rich, more understandable outcomes, so feel free to spread any ideas in regards to my stories, and you're also free to give me the most convoluted terms to incorporate into the story and, most certainly, feel free to serve as an editor, or like, a second brain for me to cook up ideas for it, and here's a rule for you: Any insult or anything that brings me into a heavy amount of stress is never allowed, but I may take foul language so feel free, but never do things that stress me out.

P.S. this group is also dedicated to help me out in my new story after the GoW crossover, it's based on the Marvel Universe and an original pony character that's based on the Mutant with a Healing Factor and claws, but is born on Earth, not Equestria.

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It’s alright.

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Sorry for my absence here. I've seen you, but I haven't made a reply. Sorry for that.

Heyyyyyyyyy look at what i found.

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