EEquestria Girls: Wondercolt Soccer of Friendship

• Equestria Girls
• Adventure
• Random
• Slice of Life

Join Rainbow Dash, Sunset Shimmer, Lightning Dust, and others as they adventure across the globe to play some soccer. And some action.

• Alt. Universe
• Human
• Other
• Lightning Dust
• Sunset Shimmer
• Rainbow Dash (EqG)
• Main 7 (EqG)

MASTERMIND360 · 20k words  ·  18  5 · 801 views

Review: Equestria Girls: Wondercolt Soccer of Friendship

Tags: Random, Adventure, Slice of Life

Summary: Sports fiction.

Review: This is an alright fiction however, the editor didn’t do well with grammar besides chapter 3 wonders through the heat.

As I’m reading chapter 4 however, there might be a few mistakes.  Make sure that the editor goes through them again.

Anyway this fiction did alright the characters need a little bit more in depth, some stuff needs to change at least for the first two chapters.  I give this a 5/10.

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Thanks for the review, and yes, there will be more in depth of the Wondercolt athletes as long as Sunset and Dash don't always get the spotlight. And if you want to see some changes for the first two chapters, what kind of changes are you expecting to see?

Nothing just your original work to be expected

Fix maybe... but I'm on break.