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Flora Blossom
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Review: A Camera

Summary: Time and space of multiverses fiction

Review:  A weird fiction that I pulled out from the review and feedback. Let's take a look.  

Four days later I started to read this and I wonder why didn’t this get the like it deserves.  Everything has a pure interest in the idea and that’s what it made me think and how I felt when reading this.  I think this fiction should have been a little bit longer since well.  The Multiverse is endless. The title of the fiction is A Camera which I was thinking of a photograph but however it was pretty clever. Maybe this fiction was to place a camera on the multiverse.  After I kept reading I started to realize that everyone was shouting. Because of caps oh yes.  Caps for every dialog is very bad and you should not have done that.

This fiction in the case there is some good stuff about this but the caps were very frustrating. 

I give this a decent score of 5/10.

Thank you for having the time to write this out (even if it wasn't much) thank you for your feedback!

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