ERuins

• MLP: FiM
• MLP Gen 5
• Dark
• Adventure

A thousand years is plenty enough time to forget. Yet there remains a story of a dragon, who lives among the ruins of a town...

• Alt. Universe
• Spike
• Other
• Hitch Trailblazer
• Izzy Moonbow
• Sunny Starscout

TheMajorTechie · 15k words  ·  368  12 · 6.3k views

Review: Ruins

Summary: Spike is in G5 hmmmmm.

Review: The fiction is pretty good. I like how Spike affection is in how he moves on.  Hopefully that this person continues the story because well, it’s that good.  I like G5 for now because of the animation but the story for the movie was not as great.  Forgive me I  just feel like they should have made a better story for g5.

This fiction could be the one that makes g5 great! I see high potential.  There is one error in the first chapter. I hope this person finds it.  :3

This story is clearly an 8/10 for me close to perfection. Stuff needs to be worked on a little bit more for grammar of lowercase for the first chapter and there is still some in other chapters but I wont be pointing where they are but still hope the person finds it.

7614776
could you elaborate on the "grammar of the first chapter" bit?

7614786
sure I will love to

7614786
there i post it on chapter 1

7614793
Thanks!