EI Can('t)Handle This!

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Random

With an energetic filly princess, there's no such thing as a quiet day for Cadence.

• Alt. Universe
• Cadance
• Flurry Heart

SunTwi06 · 3.4k words  ·  53  3 · 1k views

Review: I can(‘t) Handle This!

Tags: [Comedy], [Random]

Critic:  This story is great and the dialog there is nothing to say. There are 2 things you missed and that is grammar.

Cadence chases Flurry out of the bedroom and round the corner of the castle. The panic and anxiety start to form,

You can find this in paragraph 27.  Look what I changed….

Cadence uses her magic to disappear and teleport herself directly in front of Flurry Heart. Her plans work,

You can find this in paragraph 31.  Look what I changed.

Other than that great story…

This story will be received by me and approved by this score.

10/10.

I just can’t believe it!!! :3