ELoqui Veritatem In Caritate

• MLP: FiM
• Slice of Life

Before the sun rises, the last priest of the last Church of Equus performs an important ritual. Unlike most of his services, he does not do so alone.

• Alt. Universe
• Discord
• Other

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Review: Loqui Veritatem In Caritate.

Tags: (Slice of Life) 100%, (Alternate Universe)

Summary: Discord and Priest Mr. Waddles on a religious ritual. (not sure if it was religious but when I read it, it surely kinda was religious.)  So, Discord the spirit of chaos learns about Celestains ways.

Analysis Data:  This seems pretty weird to me and hard to criticize a religious story lore about the Celestains.  However, I think Discord would do something like this in cannon one day. I think the lore of Discord learning the pony ways and friendship makes me believe his brain is infinite and is full of data that we don’t know about.

The idea is a 9/10 I think it’s good to have something like this in pony lore where Discord learns rituals.
Interesting is a 10/10 Yes, I think it’s interesting since it’s the lord of chaos learning the Celestains.
The flow is a 9/10 I think the flow is pretty good in this fiction.
The grammar is clearly a 9/10  It may need 1 thing to polish.

Final score 37/40

At least a 9/10