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TTruth or Dare
The Mane 6 decide to play Truth or Dare. Like all good games of Truth or Dare, they'll laugh, they'll cry, and it'll get a little weird.
Zontan · 5.4k words  ·  575  25 · 7.8k views

Summary: The main 6 play a good old round of truth or dare. They are a bit more adult than in the show but at the same time more naughty too. It is a bit more into the direction 6 human teenagers would play it, but that's alright.


The story takes place after one of the casual parties, when everything is winded down a bit and in this relaxed atmosphere, Rainbow suggested to play it. It starts like one would expect and a few secrets are confessed a few silly or sneaky actions from their pasts are revealed. No big deal in general but entertaining enough to read. And that is how the story stays mostly, not into the big laughter zone, but also not boring either.

What the author comes up with for the main 6 in such a game is creative enough, mixed with some fan service of course, including jokes from the actual show and therlike. Also, and that had entertained me quite a bit, the perspective of one of the main six is told by an objective observer in one of the dares they take. Means without pony limitations and friendship getting in the way, that was pretty humorous.

Besides that, the story maintained an above average but never really high general level of humour and entertainment. Though, of course we go into the naughty zone later on, wet dreams are confessed, kisses have to be made, such stuff. It is rated teen after all, so no big thing happens of course.

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Rating: 

Comedy: 6/10 Above average in general, but with no real peaks above.
Writing Style: 7/10 Pacing and therelike are fine enough.
Idea: 7/10 The story itself is no big news, the single dares and truth are quite good though.

6.67

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