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Fallen Angel N
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Sorry about the length of the review being short, but the story itself is rather short so really, it can't be helped. The story on the list for now is "Feeding the Machine" by Nugget. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/362842/feeding-the-machine

The story is rather deep and thought provoking, the author made it to make readers think about the world that we live in now and compare the two. Perhaps they share more similarities than we think, or maybe we're overthinking it. It's up to the reader.

Now the story is deep, but it is rather short and primarily focuses on one aspect. Though it does this aspect well, this kind of story can easily be hit and miss as there are different types of readers. Nonetheless, the author wrote this story with a clear goal and I think it's safe to say he reached it.

Feeding the Machine: 70/100
:rainbowderp: If you like a story that makes you think, then this is the story for you!

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