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TPumpkins
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Mystery
A murderer goes around Ponyville, during Nightmare night season and is killing ponies also they are leaving pumpkins at the crime scene.
Gore
Violence
Death
Twilight
Pinkie
Nightmare Moon
Main 6
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 2.1k words · 324 views
TNot a prank
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Sad
What if the joke cookies weren't a prank and actually killed and turn the Ponyville citizens into cookie zombies.
Gore
Violence
Death
Rainbow Dash
Celestia
Main 6
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 3.6k words · 26 6 · 1.1k views
TBad Dragon's Short Stories
MLP: FiM
Anthology
Got a minute? It will take you even less to read one of these unrelated short stories designed for instant reader’s gratification.
Spike
Bad Dragon · 10k words · 34 39 · 1k views
TIn the clink!
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Sad
Rainbow Dash is getting arrested for her crimes.
Narcotics
Death
Profanity
Second Person
Rainbow Dash
Daring Do
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 7k words · 11 6 · 402 views
E40 Years
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
Mystery
A community collaboration of a tale that spawns across all generations of My Little Pony.
Alt. Universe
Crossover
Main 6
Grogar
Mane 5
bookhorse125 · 41k words · 72 3 · 1.4k views
TAlicorn Princess
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Horror
Your memories make you who you are. But what’s left of you when they are stolen?
Twilight
Spike
Trixie
King Sombra
Bad Dragon · 11k words · 71 23 · 2.6k views
TLuna Angels
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Deemed by society as outcasts, misfits, losers, no good punks. Apart they are nothing together they are Luna Angels
Narcotics
Sex
Violence
Death
Profanity
Anthro
Alt. Universe
Big Mac
OC
Other
anarchywolf18 · 12k words · 19 3 · 875 views
TTHE SAVAGE SWORD
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
A band of mercenaries, composed of griffons and bat ponies and led by a one winged griffon are on a quest for cold hard cash, killing whatever gets in their way.
Gore
Violence
Death
Profanity
Alt. Universe
OC
Bat Pony
Griffons
anarchywolf18 · 13k words · 20 3 · 775 views
TMetal and blood
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Sci-Fi
As the ponies took him from his family, tortured him, and replaced his flesh with metal, the only thing that kept him alive was revenge.
Gore
Violence
Death
OC
Other
Changelings
Griffons
red reaper · 4.6k words · 15 18 · 762 views
TThe Canterlot Guild
Equestria Girls
Adventure
Comedy
When a new villain is going to rule the world, old and new heroes must team up to save those they love
Violence
Alt. Universe
OC
King Sombra
Sunset Shimmer
Main 7 (EqG)
red reaper · 58k words · 13 8 · 777 views
TThe Shadow
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Dark
Thriller
A new 'hero' appeared in the city and he kills every criminal or monster with equestrian magic.
Gore
Violence
Suicide / Self Harm
Death
Alt. Universe
Main 6
Flash Sentry
Main 7 (EqG)
Pony of Shadows
red reaper · 7.4k words · 24 18 · 1.6k views
TThe Changeling empire
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Sci-Fi
Starlight and Twilight must work together to save Equestria from Queen Chrysalis's army led by terrifying cyborg, General Eclipse.
Gore
Violence
Death
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Pinkie
Chrysalis
Changelings
Starlight Glimmer
red reaper · 6.4k words · 19 15 · 851 views
ETo be a Breezie
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Slice of Life
Trapped in the world of the breezies, Twilight has to learn how to be a breezie and help her clan make it through the winter. And like every time learning is involved, she is quite eager
Twilight
Breezies
Obsi · 96k words · 361 8 · 4.4k views
TTen More Yards
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
This is the story of a hoofball-obsessed colt who will do anything in his power to fulfil his dreams and become a legend for his hometeam.
Profanity
OC
5aszs · 168k words · 7 3 · 384 views
EFrom Repair to Despair
Equestria Girls
Comedy
What happens when you get the Equestria Girls and the Three Stooges together? Well, let's find out, shall we?
Human
Crossover
OC
Other
Sunset Shimmer
Spike (EqG)
Main 7 (EqG)
A Man Undercover · 25k words · 70 22 · 3.2k views
TLateral Movement
MLP: FiM
Dungeons and Dragons
Romance
Adventure
Drama
Having been granted rulership over the city of Vanhoover, and confessed their feelings for each other, Lex Legis and Sonata Dusk have started a new life together. But the challenges of rulership, and a relationship, are more than they bargained for.
Crossover
OC
Sonata Dusk
Alzrius · 2.3m words · 147 36 · 4.1k views
TSpectral Eclipse
MLP: FiM
Mystery
Dusk Shine, archmage of Her Majesty Nightmare Moon, is assigned to aid the Lunar Inquisition in finding a terrorist known as "Ghost" where they last struck: Ponyville.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Nightmare Moon
Other
Main 6
Relux_the_Relux · 36k words · 31 1 · 1.3k views
TInsanity's Truth
MLP: FiM
Dark
Comedy
Slice of Life
Hello, I am Twilight, but I have not always been. Yesterday, I was human.
Violence
Profanity
Human
Alt. Universe
Spike
OC
Other
Main 6
Caffeinated Pinkie · 22k words · 121 11 · 4.9k views
TAssassination Club
Equestria Girls
Drama
Slice of Life
Thriller
MLP/EQG Crossover with Assassination Classroom: Fluttershy gets in an accident with a New Teacher at CHS. She discovered more about his identity, and the events around her. A new club has been established, and those who joined are in for a ride...
Death
Violence
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Crossover
Fluttershy
Other
Thunderlane
Flash Sentry
Fleetfoot
Tythen · 286k words · 67 6 · 2.9k views
TGuarded Emotions: Burying the Past
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
Twilight and Moonwhisper continue to develop their relationship while uncovering more of Moonwhisper's past.
Twilight
OC
Main 6
Alabenson · 55k words · 13 0 · 847 views
EKung Fury in Equestria
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
Kung Fury gets zapped to Equestria, and one thing is for certain: This magical land of ponies is in need of some justice!
Crossover
Human
Discord
Main 6
Bad Dragon · 3.8k words · 67 25 · 1.5k views
EImperfect Stasis
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Drama
Sci-Fi
A new adventure awaits Twilight Sparkle, years into the future, as she is crowned co-ruler of a planet several solar systems away from home... But she wakes up early and is alone on the ship. How will she cope with a over a century alone?
Twilight
OC
Mocha Star · 38k words · 80 39 · 1.9k views
ERise of the Apple Princess
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Drama
Mystery
Waking from a nightmare with no memory of what happened, Apple Bloom is shocked. She has become an Alicorn! To find what has befallen her, she seeks advice of Princess Celestia. But the royal sisters have vanished, unfurling a real nightmare!
Alt. Universe
Apple Bloom
Celestia
Luna
Main 6
CMCs
Astral Phoenix · 19k words · 118 5 · 6.3k views
TMetamorphosis
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Drama
Sci-Fi
"I believe a light will pierce the darkness and drive it away. I believe that someday we'll be able to laugh again under the clear blue sky. And I believe that Amethyst Star will be that sparkling light." [GUYVER PONIFICATION BEGINS]
Crossover
Derpy
Other
Dinky Hooves
Changelings
Sparkler
Mares Guyver · 39k words · 63 4 · 2.3k views

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