I also posted this in that other group but I'm hoping to get more than zero responses...

I've written a fic that puts Moonlight Raven and Moondancer in a cute, friendshippy situation. Early feedback suggests it's well-written and fun, but that it needs to be shortened a bit and that the ending is kind of a mismatch for the tone of the rest of the piece.

If y'all would be willing to chip-in some thoughts about it, I'd be happy to PM you a link!

Story has been posted!