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TAn Extended Holiday
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Comedy
Adventure, Mayhem, Magic of unknown origins, and talking colorful Ponies. All being unrelated events have brought three friends together into the wildest holiday that anyone could imagine.
Death
Violence
Alt. Universe
Human
Celestia
Luna
Other
Main 6
Changelings
Commander_Pensword · 2.8m words · 551 69 · 19k views
TRevenge of the Nightmares
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
A Group of mages gathered to use their magic to bring about a change in the world, a world of Night.
Alt. Universe
Human
Celestia
Luna
Nightmare Moon
Other
Main 6
Commander_Pensword · 150k words · 114 14 · 4.2k views
TCommander Thorn in Equestria.
MLP: FiM
Romance
Adventure
Sci-Fi
Commander Thorn gave his life for the Republic. His squad was overrun and he was KIA....or so we thought. Commander Thorn’s alive and kicking ass in Equestria. How can this possibly go wrong?
Gore
Crossover
Human
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
Other
Cadance
Main 6
SolidArc5542 · 123k words · 410 60 · 11k views
TAn Ancient Threat
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Tacitus has accepted friendship into his life, and he couldn't be happier. But a dark power to the north is rising, and it's up to Tacitus and his friends to stop a threat from ages long past.
OC
Main 6
Professor Tacitus · 36k words · 14 2 · 688 views
TPegasus Feathers
MLP: FiM
Romance
Mystery
Sad
Slice of Life
Tragedy
When three new students join Ponyville's school, what is under their skin is much more "magical" than what others may think. And with evil magic pushing the bonds of their friendship, will the CMC still be friends for long?
Gore
Diamond Tiara
Silver Spoon
Cheerilee
Other
CMCs
Vanilla Mocha · 31k words · 36 12 · 1.5k views
EFallacies of the Elements
MLP: FiM
Adventure
The Elements of Harmony are tied togther by the bonds of friendship. Yet, what would happen if those bonds were severed?
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
Trixie
Discord
Main 6
Dapper Guy · 30k words · 63 5 · 2.4k views
TPuella Magi Twilight Magica
MLP: FiM
Dark
Sad
Tragedy
What if there was an Equestria with only earth ponies, pegasi and alicorns? What would happen when an alien creature went around granting magical powers to certain earth ponies and pegasi? Bad stuff, that's for sure.
Gore
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Nightmare Moon
Other
Main 6
SoulboundAlchemist · 28k words · 33 10 · 1.1k views
EA Mourning Heart
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
A new pony comes to Ponyville and everypony is excited to meet him. The problem is, he's not interested in making friends. Why is such a nice pony so against having friends? The answer: he's in pain. Will the girl's help take the pain
OC
Main 6
CMCs
Professor Tacitus · 23k words · 45 6 · 1.7k views
TFluttershy's parents
MLP: FiM
Sad
A story explaining Fluttershy's upbringing and shyness.
Fluttershy
Rainbow Dash
OC
HaloEssence111 · 4.1k words · 34 4 · 4.1k views
ESweet Belles and Bitter Berries
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Sweetie Belle is confused. How can any parents be as crappy as hers? Berry Pinch is there to offer an explanation.
Rarity
Sweetie Belle
Other
keam · 2.6k words · 16 3 · 659 views
EReal Friends
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
Random
After Ranma uses the Wishbringer sword to get a new family, he is reborn as the twin sister of Twilight Sparkle.
Human
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
OC
Main 6
SoulboundAlchemist · 1.5k words · 65 6 · 2.3k views
EMy Life
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
It's the numbers. Always the numbers. You always get a number before your cutie mark. Then, only then you get your name. I'm a orange pegasus with purple mane and tail. My number is 046.
Alt. Universe
Rainbow Dash
Scootaloo
Diamond Tiara
OC
CMCs
Smileplays · 1.4k words · 9 24 · 566 views
EThe Sun never Rose
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
In a world where 6 ponies got to the Elements of Harmony before Celestia and Luna, the sisters discuss what they could have become.
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
Ekluvstuff · 1.3k words · 27 0 · 882 views

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