We, as a group, need an exceptional name for our first fanfic if we're going to set an example. I myself can't think of anything better than "The Return of Nightmare Moon" which in, and of, itself is a very bad title. If anyone else has any ideas then go ahead and toss them in.

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Might be an idea to write some of the story before we think of a title.

Although something like Sunset might fit given the name of our character and Luna taking away the sun,

3684155 Hmm, maybe "The Hour of Sunset"

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Hey I know this is both kinda too late and off topic to deal with (and I might have mentioned this already), but have you ever considered giving your 'Verse'/series a different name? I mean, there's your 'Shimmerverse', and then there's 'The Shimmerverse'. Just thought I should mention that.

Also, I kinda like the title for your first story.