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I've had this idea for a CoC story rolling around in my head for some time, and I'd like some feedback on it.
The basic concept is Twilight has found a strange mirror portal, similar to the one from EQG, in the Castle of the Two Sisters (or perhaps somewhere else, as that's a bit cliche. Alternate idea is that she's tasked with studying it by Celestia, but that one seems unlikely as Celestia would probably know of it already.)

While Twilight tries to find a book that would detail it, Spike notices it activate and accidentally gets sucked in. He awakes in Mareth as an anthropomorphic, older version of himself, and is told by Twilight from the other side of the portal that he's gotten himself into a challenge. He has one year to survive in Mareth. If his mind is corrupted by then, he stays, but if he remains pure enough, he'll be sent back.

This will all take place in the canon CoC universe, so the Champion character exists as a separate entity from Spike, though it's unlikely that their paths will cross often.

That's the basic concept of it. It would mostly just be random adventures through many of the world's corrupt perils, maybe some fan requests every now and then. I don't know, does it sound like something that could work?

3636161 Go for it dude, I'd read it. (If done right that is :raritywink:)

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Depends on what you mean by done 'right'.

3636173 Well, if it's a piece of shit I won't read it. So basically, if it's written well and really gives off the CoC theme... I'll read it. I do love me some TF/TG and corruption :rainbowkiss:

3636184 Oh, but of course! From the responses I've gotten on my other stories I'm not a terrible writer, and I've definitely improved since then. And there will definitely be plenty of fetishy things in the vein of CoC. Granted, I probably won't be able to completely capture the feel of it, but I will try my best.

3636249 I'm looking forward to it :raritywink:

Soooo...
Signal boosting this to say that I'm about to get started on this story. However, I have one major issue...

I can't think of a name for it.

If anyone sees this and can think of a good title for this concept, I'll use it and we can get this story up.

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