I need help on deciding which few chapters ideas I could elaborate more on the story Lightning Seven: Equestria Bound. The basic plot is seven animal mercs are sent to equestrian and get into various situations, here are what I have so far:
-nightmare night chapter where the mercs go a bit too far with scaring everyone -the townsfolk of ponyville spy on the mercs because they believe they are secretly evil (even though the main six try convincing the town that they aren't)
-The team attends to big fancy party (possibly Grand galloping gala)
-The team are forced to tend to Princess Luna while she's sick (joke is she's faking the whole thing)
Please I need serious help on these. Criticism and opinions are welcomed.
3024387 We need some more information before we can help; at least, I do. At what point of the story are you? What are each of the characters like? Etc.
3125663 basically these chapters are character development characters: -a buff softie -calm and silent -a brash idiot - socially awkward doof -awkward nerd -irritated complainer -mental handicap
I need help on deciding which few chapters ideas I could elaborate more on the story Lightning Seven: Equestria Bound. The basic plot is seven animal mercs are sent to equestrian and get into various situations, here are what I have so far:
-nightmare night chapter where the mercs go a bit too far with scaring everyone
-the townsfolk of ponyville spy on the mercs because they believe they are secretly evil (even though the main six try convincing the town that they aren't)
-The team attends to big fancy party (possibly Grand galloping gala)
-The team are forced to tend to Princess Luna while she's sick (joke is she's faking the whole thing)
Please I need serious help on these. Criticism and opinions are welcomed.
3024387
We need some more information before we can help; at least, I do. At what point of the story are you? What are each of the characters like? Etc.
3125663 basically these chapters are character development
characters:
-a buff softie
-calm and silent
-a brash idiot
- socially awkward doof
-awkward nerd
-irritated complainer
-mental handicap