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Hello my fellow lovers of all things chubby! I come to you asking for a little help in figuring out how to execute an idea I have for one of my current story here. To ease any confusion as to what this story is about, I'll add a little synopsis of what I've got.

Synopsis: With a new trend on the rise that has mares of all origins filling their tummies up in large amounts, things are beginning to change in the Land of Equestria. Out of everyone that has been taking on this trend as of late, Princess Cadance finds herself questioning whether she should join in as well, fighting her own logic and wondering what impact it might have on her reputation. But after unknowingly drinking Poison Joke after mistaking it for an exotic herb and slowly succumbs to its effects warping her mind, the Princess of Love finds herself without a choice as she embarks on a wacky adventure in a new, rounded body in a world where belly noises, big eating and weight gain are seemingly all the rage.

With that settled, I present to you my idea! As I currently write this story, I have come up with a piece of lore that may shift the story drastically and I wanted your opinion. It goes as follows: With some characters having taken on this trend earlier than others, they've developed themselves to be more accustomed to its premise and have gained skills that others haven't seen before. And with the goal being eating big, some ponies have gained the ability to tell what they themselves or other ponies' have eaten, want to eat or how their belly feels solely based on the noises it makes.

With that in mind, I have three characters currently lined up to have this skill at their disposal:

1. Fluttershy

2. Derpy

3. Pinkie Pie

All three of these characters are being written in with this skill in mind (As I'm currently redoing the chapters one by one). But I wanted to know if these characters would be good picks to have this sort of skill whether based on Canon characterization or Fandom characterization.

So, what are your thoughts?

I without a doubt want to pick Fluttershy she's one of my favorite innocent pony.

I would have to go with Pinkie on this one given her nack for weirdness or just being Pinkie plus she's also able to eat large amounts of food.

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