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THoney's Hearth's Warming Tale
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Slice of Life
A mare gets help from Lemon Hearts and Twinkleshine to woo a stallion before Hearth's Warming.
Profanity
Twilight
OC
Flash Sentry
Royal Guard
Lemon Hearts
Jmaster49 · 22k words · 15 3 · 345 views
TTwilight Sparkle and the Pick-up Line
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Slice of Life
Is it love at first sight? Or should I walk by again?
Twilight
Rarity
Cadance
Winston · 1000 words · 387 12 · 3.9k views
TUnplanned
MLP: FiM
Romance
Rarity and Rainbow Dash spend the night together, and it's wonderful. But... then what?
Sex
Rainbow Dash
Rarity
Winston · 3.1k words · 179 17 · 2.4k views
TThe Wife of the Old Draconequus
Equestria Girls
Romance
Drama
The legend of how the rare Sleigh Beggy became the wife of the mage that is neither fae nor human
Alt. Universe
Discord
Fluttershy (EqG)
misskoifishpony · 52k words · 70 4 · 1.8k views
TMy Little Pony: Ren's Adventures In Equestria
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
Sci-Fi
Ren Loodan, a human who awoken in Equestria from a spaceship, meets the Mane Six and tries to search for his past and defeat the forces of evil, along with other humans who awaken in pods as they team up with Ren in search for their pasts as well.
Alt. Universe
Human
Fluttershy
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Rarity
Main 6
MaxTV1234 · 928k words · 4.8k views
TDepression
Equestria Girls
Romance
Dark
A new student comes to CHS, but is suffering severe depression. Can the Humane 6 find a way to bring him back to the light?
Sex
Human
OC
Other
Sunset Shimmer
Principal Cinch
Fluttershy (EqG)
ZombieBrony22 · 14k words · 54 16 · 4.4k views
THunter and Prey
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Adventure
Sad
Ahuizotl has locked Daring Do in thirty-seven unique death traps; but he was never trying to kill her.
Alt. Universe
Fluttershy
OC
Daring Do
Ahuizotl
Beware The Carpenter · 1k words · 51 10 · 2.9k views
TOne Call Away
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Slice of Life
After yet another failed attempt at dating, Fluttershy turns to an old friend for comfort.
Fluttershy
OC
Inkwell Prose · 5.8k words · 16 2 · 444 views
EThe Picnic
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
The CMC are at it again, trying to get their cutie marks. But instead of trying something new, they go back to one of their old tactics. Matchmakers.
Fluttershy
Big Mac
Cheerilee
CMCs
Inkwell Prose · 2k words · 50 9 · 1.5k views
EA Rose For Luna
MLP: FiM
Romance
Finally, Roseluck's special project is complete. Now, it's time for her to request an audience with Princess Luna, and see if her rose really does give her luck.
Luna
Roseluck
ocalhoun · 2.8k words · 561 9 · 6.3k views

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