Hey, everypony. New story has been written by yours truly, and I would like to ask if anypony out there could proofread it before I post it onto FIMFiction. I don't want to reveal too much about the story too soon, but it mainly centres around the crash of a huge new airliner and the investigation into its loss, with the Flashlight pairing playing (I hope) a significant role in the storyline. Much of it is based on the infamous downing of British Overseas Airways Co-operation Flight 781 on January 10th, 1954.

This is probably my darkest storyline to date, so I would strongly recommend that this be read by someone who specialises in tragedy stories. I would also like to point out that I have not yet divided the story into chapters as I was hoping for a second opinion on where each chapter should start and end. If you would like to take a look at the story and give me your opinions, please reply, and I'll send you a link. Thank you.

4071981 I've never been a proofreader before, but I think I could help as I do have a pretty decent understanding of grammar and can easily point out typos. You also mentioned that you need a second opinion as to where to cut off your chapters at and I consider myself to be somewhat skilled at blocking out where one chapter ends and another begins. Hope I can help.

4096271 Well, okay then. Here's the link. If you could also let me know about any references I may have inadvertently made to more controversial air disasters so I can rectify them, I'd be very obliged.

4096324 I need permission to access it.

4096510 happened when I was looking over the PinkieBurn Story this person did. I think they forget to let the link be open.

4096547 Do I take it that I need to use the Publish To The Web option?

4096607 more like anyone with a can either comment or edit. Make it sharable.

4096510 Okay, I think I might have done it. Try it again now.

4096634 O.K. Now I've got it. Thanks.

4096634 Hmm. This is gonna take several days and a few lookthroughs for me to figure out breaking it up properly. I'll PM you later with my notes.

4096860 Okay, thanks.

4096867 Sure thing.