"Gathered friends, listen again to our legend of the Bionicle…
In a time before time, the world was once filled with biomechanical beings. The Matoran and Agori villagers, the Glatorian warriors, and the mighty Toa heroes. We flourished, but the inevitable came as our civilization disappeared.
Millennia passed, and the race of equines rose to prominence. Our history turned to legend and legend turned to a forgotten memory. Yet, remnants remain and many instances throughout history of ponies finding them.
These are their stories…"

That's my summary. Please, let me know what you think. It is alright, or does it need any improvement? Thanks.

-W.S.

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I like it!

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I would read it

2659106 ya would read it

Vakama like. I'm liking this already

Well, what you came up with is very in-character with Vakama and his speech pattern, so that's good. I'd read it.

I would read the heck out of this.

I like it.