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Hingard
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Welcome to the "I Haven't got Three Reviews yet" Thread.

This is going to be a weekly thread where members who have yet to receive three reviews from other members can post their story.

Rules:
1: Only submit your story if you have not gotten three reviews from the group.
2: Once you have three reviews do not submit the same story again to this thread.
3: If you get a review please review your reviewer!
4: If you’re a reviewer waiting for someone to come back to your story, try PMing the person you reviewed first. If that fails, send a PM to either Profcharles or Hingard and we’ll sort it out.

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599003

Name: Last Night A DJ Saved My Life.

Tags: Tragedy, Romance and Slice Of Life.

Summary: Train wrecks and stereotypes. The city of Manehatten remains divided, even after the Elements Of Harmony brought the world back together. The lower streets of said city are filled with smog, the populace has taken to calling the lower places the 'Downzone'. One stallion has had enough and decides that life ain't worth the waste. But when he's stopped from taking his own life by a mare he thought long gone, what will he do? Can Twisted Morals love her, or will his guilt and violent temper tear them apart?

Link: Clicky

~Edward

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Name: Star Wars: First Contact

Tags: Dark, Crossover, Alternate Universe, Human

Summary: A lone Imperial frigate that made a blind jump into hyperspace winds up over Equestria. Under the command of a lone Sith, they decide to explore the planet, only to be dragged into the planets affairs.
Star Wars/MLP crossover

Link: Click

-Spytim

Whats the point of being an Admin, if I can't abuse the hell out of this? (Within the rules of course :rainbowwild: vren, you can put the newspaper down now. vren, put it dow-THWAK!)

Name: King of Chaos
Tags: [Romance] [Dark] [Comedy] [Random] [Adventure] [Alternate Universe] [All the Tags!]
Summary: When Discord defeated the Alicorn sisters during the War of Chaos, he declared himself King of All Equestria, banishing Celestia to the Mirrorworld and turning Luna into a shadow. Now, 3000 years later, he rules with the help of his Royal Mage, Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie, his Royal Jester. But Twilight holds a secret that could end his rule of chaos...
Link: King of Chaos

Name: Where Cold Winds Blow
Tags: [Adventure]
Summary: During a minor diplomatic meeting to the Everfrozen Forest, home of the Reindeer, an ancient evil abuducts Princess Luna and Prince Arctis, lord of the snow. Now Twilight, with the help of Arcits' daughter Aneira, must uncover and activate the Eight Shrines of the Defenders in order to halt the Windigo invasion.

Far from home, with only the generosity of the Reindeers to assist her, can Twilight overcome the many obstacles in her path, or will she fall prey to the bitter winds of the north?
Link: Where Cold Winds Blow

Name: Expect the Unexpected
Tags: [Romance] [Adventure]
Summary: The Spirit Stones. Thirteen stones which contain great and powerful spirits, bound by Star Swirl the Bearded himself, entrusted to the Princesses. But when Nightmare Moon was banished to the moon, they were lost, quickly relegated to legend, then myth, before fading from history altogether.

But when Twilight releases them by accident, they spread across Equestria, chaos following in their wake as they seek new masters.

Can Twilight and her friends stop the spirits in time, before Equestria is destroyed?

And what is their link to Gaia, the lost Alicorn of the earth?

Prepare to expect the unexpected.
Link:Expect the Unexpected

I'll leave it at that for now. (Yes, I have many more where they came from.) And don't feel pressured to do all of them—just do whichever one you feel like doing (May I recomend King of Chaos if you're looking for a good read, and Expect the Unexpected if you wish to help me out, as that's the one I'm struggling with).

599003

Name: Fallout Equestria: Viva Las Pegasus
Tags: Tragedy/Dark/Adventure/Crossover/Alternate Universe
Description: The City of New Pegasus remained unharmed by the bombs and the megaspells, and has
been growing ever since. Beneath the city lights, the dwellers of Stable 188 live their lives
ignorant of what lies above. Every once in a year, a dweller gets cast away into the
Wasteland. Meet Farsight, a pony from the Stable 188, who suffers such terrible fate, and
watch him rise to power in a post-apocalyptic mobster world... just to fall back into oblivion.
Link: Viva Las Pegasus

599003

Name:Our Saviour, Our Princess

Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Slice of Life

Description: Blaze, a low ranking officer in the Royal Guard, starts to consider that there isn't a point to his career. For over five years he has safeguarded the majestic Princess Celestia from any who has sought to harm her. But that's just it - nopony has, not even an attempt. Blaze's duties now include watching over empty unused rooms in the Palace, or occasionally escorting the Princess to another uneventful meeting. The young unicorn finally sees it time to resign his commission.
However, one night whilst covering for the Library Guards, Blaze stumbles across a long hidden tome. As the guard begins to read, he finally learns the truths behind events in history that he grew up learning, but never really paid much attention to. In a single night, he learns just how much Princess Celestia has sacrificed for all of Ponykind.

Link:http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40715/our-saviour-our-princess

Name: No More Tears

Tags: dark, sad

Description: After a life of loneliness and despair two older fillies find themselves crossing paths on multiple occasions only to be brought more hardships than anypony should bare alone. Will these fillys together make peace with their past and present or will they carry these burdens throughout their lives alone, living a live of sadness and seclusion.

Link:http://www.fimfiction.net/story/63091/no-more-tears

vren55
Group Admin

599061 You know that I wouldn't have hit you with a newspaper I was reading. I'd just let the edge drop so I could frown at you.

But seriously, to ALL MEMBERS if you abuse the system, by not giving a counter review or by submitting when you have more than three reviews, I will bring the hammer down.

599236
Eh, I wouldn't expect anything less.
Actually going to review some of these in a bit anyway.

Name:Garden of love
Tags:fancy pants, celestia, twilight, OC, other, Discord
Short summary:Twilight as a young filly falls in love with a colt she doesn't know yet, upset and confused she goes to her room in the tower. Celestia comes to see whats wrong, this is when she asks Celestia about her first love. Celestia tells her about her first love and her first best friend. about Celestia and her early years.
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/37749/the-garden-of-love

Name: Equestria First and Only

Tags: Cross-Over, Dark, Tragedy, Adventure, Human

Short summary: It's a Tanith First and Only Cross-Over, kind of tribute to Dan Abnett's glorious work. Equestria was covered with global barrier/invisibilty spell, isolating Equestria planet from the universe ( of Warhammer 40.000 ). When barrier was about to be destroyed, Royal Sisters convinced General Anders from Imperial Guard, and Equestria joined the Imperium of Mankind. However, to do this Princess Luna sacrifised thousands of ponies, to be doomed into the grim darkness of the eternal war...

Link : Equestria First and Only

Stay Awesome

Verlax

Reviews Left : 0

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606806
Oh hey, I've just seen that on EQD. Totally going to check it out.

Comment posted by The Engineer deleted Jan 12th, 2013

Name: A Journey Unthought of: A man's life in Equestria

Tags: Human, Adventure, Comedy, Slice of Life

Short summary: A human is used as fodder for a teleportation experiment by a shady government thinktank. Tossed into the Void between worlds, he finds sanctuary in the home of Lyra Heartstrings and Bon Bon in a world that mistrusts his alien presence and believes him to be nothing but a dangerously intelligent animal. Things become stranger when he encounters a certain 'Madman with a Box' and comes to the realization that Equestria holds older secrets than ponykind; that another extinct race once ruled the planet.

Note: Doctor Who crossover included!:derpytongue2: Not a wangsty HiE in the end!

Link: A Journey Unthought of: a man's life in Equestria

This is just any idea, but at the bottom of each post either new or old can you put how many reviews you have left from the group.

Example: I have one review by a member of this group, so I have two reviews left before I delete my post in here.

This just makes things a little easier for people in our group looking to do a review.

Its just a thought.

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Comment posted by Hingard deleted Jan 21st, 2013

Name: Kill What's Left of My Modesty

Tags: Sad Romance

Short summary: Octavia deals with the loss of a loved one, and the emotions and pain that follow such loss. Some say time can heal all wounds, but what about those that cut so deep they slice the soul?

Link: Click the title.

Three reviews left. This is a short story that I became inspired to write during physics (don't worry, there's no math involved in the story.) and just had to write. I've done my best to take the advice that some of you have so graciously given me. Looking back on this, I can see some improvement from my earlier works and thank y'all so much. I still struggle with the whole "show don't tell" concept but I hope that I'm grasping it better.

Name/Link: A Young Lady's Guide to the Demon Slaying Arts

Tags: Tragedy, Comdey, Adventure, Humanized Universe (Season 2 canon)

Short Summary: Monsters and demons live alongside the citizens of Equestria, blending in and committing murders. They're powerful enough to repel magic and shatter swords. And it's up to one young girl to stop them.

Reviews left: 2

Name and Link: Chrysalis' Revenge

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/58543/chrysalis-revenge

Tags: Adventure, Dark

Short Summary: Three months after the wedding a new Unicorn meets Twilight. To make matters worse it looks like she might replace her. Meanwhile Queen Chrysali returns with some dark secrets of her own. The mane six have more than their fair share of problems including facing those they viewed as friends

Reviews Left: 3

Name: The Ballad of Jack and Sylvia: an Equestrian Odyssey

Tags: Human, Romance, Dark, Adventure

Short summary:Jack and Sylvia are two very different humans. Sylvia is a massive Brony; Jack finds ponies annoying and wishes they would go away. The both of them are thrust into the world of Equestria. At the same time, a sinister force seeks to unmake Equestria once and for all. Jack and Sylvia get caught up in the middle of it. Can they befriend the Mane 6 and, together, save the day? Or will mistrust and xenophobia lead to the destruction of everything? Only time can tell.

Link: The Ballad of Jack and Sylvia: an Equestrian Odyssey

Number of reviews left: 2

Not sure if anyone actually checks this tread but for me anyway it'll be nice start with my reviews. Anyway let me get right to it.

Name: Nox Arcana

Tags: Tragedy, Alt Universe, Adventure

Short summary: Wanted and unwilling to fight the very ponies she once called friends, Luna is forced to run, and hide like a common criminal. With no allies, to run too or acquire help from, Luna must avoid the numerous patrols and the Elements of Harmony all the while trying to find what happened that night which caused the sun to never rise and what or who could have caused Celestia to never wake from her sleep.

Link Nox Arcana

Number of reviews left: 1

Name: Our Little Diamond

Tags: Comedy, Slice of Life, Human

Description: Robert Ellis is not a particularly devoted brony, though he's read a lot of the fanfiction, and he really dislikes "My Little Dashie" and the "doorstep filly" sub-genre it spawned. Whoever decided to abduct Diamond Tiara as she slept and deposit her in a box on Bob's doorstep must have a taste for dramatic irony.

But Bob isn't interested in playing by the rules of the genre. Not when he's got his big sister, her two kids and his pal Trevor the UFO-hunting policeman to call on for backup. (Summary subject to expansion in the near future.)

Reviews remaining: 3

Name: A Real B*ckin Villain

tags: sad, dark, random,

description: Twilight and her friends have faced several villains, but were they really that evil? Can the main six take on a flat out evil villain? Can this fanfic get featured? Read for the answers.
(No, I couldn't think of a better description)
(No, despite the image this has nothing to do with Bane)

link:click this
reviews remaining: 3

I don't know if anyone actually really looks at this thread anymore, but what can I say? An opportunity to advertise is an opportunity to advertise.

Name: A Touch of Chaos
Tags: Human, adventure, dark.
Short summary: Chaos is a wonderful thing, isn't it? But when you can't cause it yourself, what's a poor draconequus to do? The answer's simple. Find a patsy. And if you can't find one? Make one.
Linky
Number of reviews left: 3

Name: Paved With Good Intentions
Tags: Human, adventure, dark.
Short summary: Changelings. Cruel, sadistic, self-interested vermin. Or at least, that's what everyone thinks. But if you dig deeper, you'll find that there's a little more to them. Not much more, granted, but enough. (fyi: the sequel to the above story, though you don't have to read that one to get this one)
Linkie
Number of reviews left: 2

There is never enough opportunity to advertise. :twilightsmile:

So well :

Name : 2986 Steps
Tags : Dark, ( Cross-Over )

Short Summary : Cross-Over in bracket, because this story is based on polish book : 2586 Steps not translated into English. Basically, this is my english translation + ponyfication of this story. Actually, no knowledge of the source material is required ( besides, you will never get the original one ).

Twilight Sparkle is sent to the city of Flankfurt, because of the leprosy epidemy there. However, the longer she will fight the plague, she will become more sure, that it's somebody responsible for this disaster...

Link : 2986 Steps Link

Number of Reviews left : 2

Name:An Angel and her Soldier
Tag: Dark, Crossover, Human

Short Summary: Roland, the leader of the Crimson Lance dies, along side Angel, the daughter of (SPOILER!!!!!) Handsome Jack. Both of them respawned inside the Everfree, where they meet Headshot, a young Sniper pegasus, hunting down a target that he knew all his life. The world is engulfed by war and death by Anarchy, Discord's much more deadly brother.

Link: Clickity Click Click- Claptrap

Reviews: 3

Name: Loving the Sunny Skies
Tag: Romance

Short Summary: Shield Breaker was the worst of the worst of the guard force, he was always late and never actually bothered with obeying the law. He bumps into a pegasus with a white coat and pink mane, she needed to get to the castle and he leads her there(through illegally running on rooftops) and then he figures out that the pegasus she helped was actually the Princess' niece.

Link:Click it or you'll make Sunny Skies sad

Reviews: 3

Name: Phantoms Of The Past

Tag: Dark, Adventure, Alternate Universe, Human

Description: After a mysterious object crash lands on the fringes of the Crystal Empire and Kingdom of Equestria the elements of harmony find their fates tied with an alien creature who is struggling to understand why fate has brought him there.

Link: Story link

Reviews: 3

I haven't got 3 reviews yet for spellbound :raritycry:
dark romance with T. Sparkle and OC
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68365/spellbound
link for your convenience

name: who am I, what is a pony?

tags: random, comedy, human
short description:
You wake up one day; You are a pony. What is a that? Why are most other ponies so big? Why do they keep staring at you?

You are a very strange pony. When you need to do something you can, no matter what you could do before. Wings? sure. Magic? sure! sounds great right? One problem. Sun Butt and Moon Butt are constantly trying to control you, and try to make your life miserable! You must fight back for freedom liberty and the pursuit of wubs!
(so you won't freak out while reading. it isn't ACTUALLY a Alicorn.:ajbemused:)
umm please be honest with review, tell me what sucks and what doesn't :unsuresweetie:

Name: Ghostrider seeker of revenge

Tags: Sad, Dark, Crossover, Alternative Universe

Short description: A pony went through the worst, some think he is a monster but he is just a a lost soul trying to get his revenge. And another old mare's tale come true.

Only inspired by marvels Ghost Rider

Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/82970/ghostrider-seeker-of-revenge

Reviews 3

Name: The Code's Apprentice

Tags: Dark, Adventure, Romance, Alt Universe

Short summary: For a thousand years, the Code of Harmony has ruled Equestria, and the Code of Dissonance has sabotaged its works at every turn. Now the war for control over the land will come to a head, and one unicorn's decision may decide the fate of all.

Link http://www.fimfiction.net/story/90496/the-codes-apprentice

Number of reviews left: 2.

Note: Story is still ongoing. Romance is mostly a side story, but has implications within the plot.

826642 Still not a single review... How disappointing.

Hingard
Group Admin

870264 give it some time we have a lot of fics in our folders and since it's still school time not a lot of people have time to read.

Name: Stallions Being Totally Judgemental
Tags: Comedy Random
Short summary: A group of stallion go through another typical day judging mares on a scale of one to ten. Shenanigans and hilarity ensue.
Link: Stallions Being Totally Judgemental

870264

Also I think it would help if you provide a link to your story. Not many people will actively go to your profile to search for it.

895795learned how to link between now and that comment, but seriously its one extra click.

896291

Not saying that it'll completely stop people, but you underestimate people.

896468 I lost hope for our species lilong ago

896468 I lost hope for our species lilong ago

Comment posted by Desrium deleted Apr 21st, 2013

Name: Forlorn Ascension

Tags: Dark Adventure (Sci-fi)

Short summary: Equestria's future was full of hope and promise when the races of Earth took to the heavens in their spacecraft. They went as one, united under a single Federation in the interest of exploring space and finding evidence of other lifeforms. In the case of a stallion named Phineas Startrot, however, the venture into space was not a grand adventure past the stars. It was a nightmare.

Link

Reviews left: Two (Thanks again, Digital_Hex)

Name: The Shadows of Yadith

Tags: Dark - Cosmic Horror

Short Summary:"In some remote corner of the universe, poured out and glittering in innumerable solar systems, there once was a star on which clever animals invented knowledge. That was the highest and most mendacious minute of "world history" - yet only a minute. After nature had drawn a few breaths the star grew cold, and the clever animals had to die..." - Friedrich Nietzsche

Reviewed by The Equestrian Critics Society: Review - 8.9

Link: The Shadows of Yadith

933288

MLP/Lovecraft crossover? I'm definitely taking a look at this.

Name: The School Election

Tags: Slice of Life

Summary: When Cherilee announces that there will be an election for school president. Diamond Tiara and Sweetie Belle want to be the winner. So they go head to head for a spot to win. They will do anything to be elected.

Link:The School Election

Reviews left: 3

Name: Cosmic Dust
Tags: Adventure, Alternate Universe, Human, SciFi
Short Summary: A pony shows up on Earth and turns a human's life around. Space adventures await them.

Link: Cosmic Dust
Status: Ongoing
Reviews left: 3

Name: A soul to spare.
Tags: Dark, Comedy, Human.
summary: An abandoned laboratory is discovered, filled with all kinds of wondrous and unknown objects. Celestia sets her best scientist to work to make heads and tails or these things. But one day an accident occurs, and something that nopony knew was even there, escaped.

Now in a new and different land, how will things turn out?

Link: A soul to spare
Status: Ongoing
Reviews left: 3

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