I want to review or proofread your stories. Completed or not, I am here to help!

Hm... mhm... that's pretty much it.

Edit: I don't do stories with explicit material. Too much cringe for me.

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I have a short story I'd like reviewed if you're interested. It's more of a one-shot but it counts.

6726528
You could kill a few brain cells with my questionable idea. Told in rhyme. Not AAAB but still in rhyme.

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Unfortunately, I don't do stories with that sort of material. I should have made that clear.

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Well go ahead and post it here. As long as it's short, I'll have time to read it.

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Here it is.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/427393/making-piggy-pie-a-mommy-for-hearths-warming

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No sweat. Thanks for responding.

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Oh, hm, I see. It's also one with explicit content. Unfortunately, those I do not read. I neither have the experience nor the desire to review this story, you may find more success elsewhere.

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Okay thanks anyway.

Hmm, that's a really interesting offer. I'm a relatively new writer with only two stories and would love a review of my second story. I had a friend already proof read it for me but it wouldn't hurt to have a second opinion and would love a review of it as well

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/425243/twilight-sparkles-revenge-prank

Dunno if this counts as a short story but here ya go.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/405290/pokmon-of-harmony

Does anyone have a story I have proofread or help with?I'm here to help.I'm not a good writer but I am a good comment-er.